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A random fanfic writer with too many fictional crushes and fandoms.

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What if the magic mirror didn't lead to Canterlot High? What if she ended up alone in the woods? What if she was still a pony? What if she couldn't talk on the other side? What if she ended up in a certain well-known Oregon town? In this fic, Twilight goes through the setup of the first Equestria Girls movie, but ends up in Gravity Falls, still a pony. She finds herself alone in the woods and frighted by all the supernatural encounters she comes across. Luckily, Twilight is found by a strange boy, who's fascinated by her and takes her in as a temporary pet to study on after he realizes that she might not be the average mindless monster. For those wondering, no, there's no TwiDip here. You're safe from that. The cover art was done my Launchycat. All credit goes to her.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 24 )

Chapters are too short. I'd recommend working on making them a bit longer. I'd also try not to use "in this fic" in the description, which also happens to have a small typo "frighted" should be "frightened".

A few questions also: Why, of all things, did Twilight lose her voice? And why isn't she a human in this universe?

5761644 Cause i thought it could be interesting to see her and Dipper spawn a friendship without having any dialogue from her. I wanted to try something new to separate it from the other GF/MLP crossovers. Plus, it'll be fun to write about a mute creature despite having the intelligence of human beings. I'll take your advice about longer chapters though.

5761851 if you hadn't made her mute the story wouldn't have been half as interesting! ;)

You should at least TRY to reach 800-1k words per chapter, that way they actually feel lime chapters and not small snippets that are smatched away before you hardly start reading.
You can have more than one pov per chapter if you clearly change the perspective. [Pov= point of view]

I like it so far!

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Thank you for your support. The prologue is really the only part i plan to be from Twilight's POV. The rest of the story is told through Dip's.

Hmmm mute Twillight in Gravity Falls...........:flutterrage:INSTA FAVE:flutterrage: i like to see where THIS is going :pinkiehappy:

LONGER CHAPTERS:flutterrage:

5948406 *Whiny voice* But it's haaaaaaaaaaaard.......:raritycry:

SO IS LIFE:pinkiecrazy:

This is an awesome idea, can't wait for more! :twilightsmile:
Also, I have totally watched gravity falls *makes a liarjack face* :derpytongue2:

6066369 I highly recommend GF. It's even my favourite show of all time. It's interesting, dark, and the writing and characters are amazing. Dipper is actually my fav fictional character (Tied with Wirt from OTGW).

Heh, you got me interested in this.

Interesting.

This is really good

what if the author wouldn't stop saying what if?

Darn it! I really thought there would be more!

GO MABEL
THROWS MABEL A STUFFED WADELS TOY
GO

I got interested as soon as Stan actually said please in a genuine use of the actual meaning of the word


AND COULD YOU PLEASE MAKE THESE CHAPTERS LONGER?!:flutterrage::twilightangry2:

It's really unfortunate the story is dead. This is the only MLP GF crossover I can find that has it perfectly. The ponies in GF and they can't talk.

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