• Published 14th Jan 2015
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A Competition With Two Winners - 1Bit



Rainbow Dash has been fighting her feelings about Applejack for a while now, but when Applejack falls in love with somepony else, what will Rainbow do?

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About That Sequel...

If you haven't seen it already, you can find the sequel Facing Consequences, Making Choices down below! It may be a bit longer than this one but who knows? For now, the first chapter is up so I hope you enjoy it!

Find the story here: Facing Consequences, Making Choices

Comments ( 3 )

5575102 To be honest, you pretty much were spot on with what you said. I found it seemed to work that RD acted like a bit of an idiot here, I mean she's always been pretty cocky with most things, thinking she can get what she wants and being new to actually loving somepony, takes advice all too willingly even though the advice is AWFUL. tbh, I think most people blamed AJ because we all dream that it would just work and they'd be happy and stuff but then that would just be silly. :derpytongue2:

5575192 Thank you for the honest comment. Frankly, being new to writing and all, I still have a lot to learn with characterisation and such. I hope to improve in the sequel and possibly resolve some conflicts made nearer to the end of this story. :twilightsmile:

Wow, awesome that people are still finding this and favoriting it! You guys are SO awesome :rainbowkiss:

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