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Vinyl-ScratchDJ17


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Herobrine returns, more powerful than ever, and will stop at nothing to put his enemies where they belong. The many mob forces join together for one last battle of wits and guts to put an end to Herobrine's evil plot. Will they succeed, or will Herobrine manage to take over? Many will risk their lives to stop Herobrine, and all is thought to be lost.

For the cost of war.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 9 )
Comment posted by Vinyl-ScratchDJ17 deleted Jan 5th, 2015

Dislike just becouse illuminati was a chapter title

oh hell na that just ruined the whole thing about that video :twilightangry2:

5536444 hey, dont try to get to upset. this was my friends first story.- Vinyl (account owner)

Hello fellow author I would like to give you a few tips to make the story better and by a few all you have to do is stretch it out a bit make the deaths dramatic and also never let someone discourage you but I do want you to fix it there are a few spelling mistakes but not that much it has a good storyline I mean its great just stretch it out a bit and its awesome and that's all also this is a very long sentence.

Thanks for the tip about the music, it really improved my reading experience.
:pinkiesad2:

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