MLPEG: Melody and Music Festival

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MLPEG: Melody and Music Festival

The Rainbooms go to a music festival, but they see a band reeking havoc. Will the Rainbooms need help?

Cancelling since nopony likes it.

Chapters (3)

Ch. 1: Feat. DJ-PON3 · 29th Dec 2014 · 428 words
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Ch. 2: The Integrity Girls · 29th Dec 2014 · 653 words
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Ch. 3: Uh, Oh! · 29th Dec 2014 · 432 words
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SiIver Spoon

SiIver Spoon #1 · Dec 29th, 2014 · · · Ch. 3: Uh, Oh! ·

Before Reading:

Description:

The Rainbooms go to a music festival, but they see a band reeking havoc. Will the Rainbooms need help?

Really? That's the "edge of my seat" question? What's with the faces? Is this a troll-fic?

Chapters:
Too short.

I can already tell this will be a horrible story.~Silver Spoon

The Guardian and Friends

The Guardian and Friends #2 · Dec 29th, 2014 · · · Ch. 3: Uh, Oh! ·

I can already tell this is a self insert story because of the terrible EQG OC.

ThunderWonder

ThunderWonder #3 · Dec 29th, 2014 · · · Ch. 3: Uh, Oh! ·

This story attracted my attention for all the wrong reasons.

She pointed to the van, as if asking if she could come.
“You wanna come?” Sunset asked.

Translation: GET IN THE VAN!!!!!1!!!!1!!1!1!1!1!1!!1!1

As for where you got the pictures: Are you sure it's starsue and not Mary Sue?

Not gonna lie, I skipped the songs.

I've lost track of how many times I've pointed people to this group, but you should really read up on writing before continuing this story. I wish you luck on improving your writing skills.

~~Unless this is a trollfic in which case screw you~~

Maypl_Bougher

Maypl_Bougher #4 · Dec 29th, 2014 · · · Ch. 3: Uh, Oh! ·

Sorry all of you reviewers. It's my first story on here, and I stayed up pretty much all night writing it. I was a little lazy with the lyrics because I was tired and I will make them better. The songs are better if they have a the melody and music with it.
So sorry. Maypl Bougher...

Maypl_Bougher

Maypl_Bougher #5 · Dec 29th, 2014 · · 7 · Ch. 3: Uh, Oh! ·

This is Maypl's mother speaking:

Isn't My Little Ponies for children? I didn't read many children's books or watch many TV shows, as a child, that had a huge, deep plot within them. Most of them were shallow. They were also all rather basic, really. If this is a fimfic, wouldn't the simple story plot go along with the fact that it is meant for the entertainment of children? What is this about Trollfic? Are you just judgmental, because you want all of the praise and compliments to go to the stories that you wrote? Or is this some role-playing game where you are playing the part of the little bratty, nemesis ponies?

Friendship is Magic, huh? hrmm... Perhaps some of you should watch the show more often and gain some of the rather "basic" morals of being kind. There is such a thing as a critique without being so rude.

Thanks,
ENT Bougher

The Guardian and Friends

The Guardian and Friends #6 · Dec 29th, 2014 · 9 · · Ch. 3: Uh, Oh! ·

5437854

Isn't My Little Ponies for children?

While the target demographic is for little girls, the show has gained a mass cult following with male teens and male young adults, taking almost 90% of the viewers that watch the show regularly.

Also, it's My Little Pony, not My Little Ponies.

I didn't read many children's books or watch many TV shows, as a child, that had a huge, deep plot within them.

Unless you're going to take your daughter to see a Lord of The Rings movie, most movies don't really have a deep plot to it, especially in children's movies. Nowadays, kid's movies have become dumber and dumber, not treating their audience maturely. Just look at Good Burger or Master of Disguise for that.

But there are some kid's movies that have some complex plot elements in there, like Epic or Frozen, which I bet your daughter loves the latter.

If this is a fimfic, wouldn't the simple story plot go along with the fact that it is meant for the entertainment of children?

This site is not for children. This actually has some pretty mature stories in this site, though if your daughter doesn't discover the mature setting on here, then she won't find those type of fanfics.

What is this about Trollfic?

Trollfics are mainly over-the-top stories just for shock value or parodies of bad stories, like this one.

Are you just judgmental, because you want all of the praise and compliments to go to the stories that you wrote?

Writers don't come here for just praise. They come here for critique and constructive critisism to improve on their stories. If the best authors on here just got positive comments and not negative ones that point out the flaws, then they wouldn't be so great.

Or is this some role-playing game where you are playing the part of the little bratty, nemesis ponies?

Ma'am, public roleplaying on here is banned, because of something to do with space in the site servers. But you can use PMs to private RP.

Friendship is Magic, huh? hrmm... Perhaps some of you should watch the show more often and gain some of the rather "basic" morals of being kind. There is such a thing as a critique without being so rude.

I don't think there's an episode about Spike the dragon writing a wish fulfillment fanfic about him and Rarity, then him getting tons of hate for it, and the mane 6 telling everyone about constructive critisism instead of trashing it.

Though I would pay money to see that episode.

ENT Bougher

An Ent? Oh my god, it's Treebeard!

ThunderWonder

ThunderWonder #7 · Dec 29th, 2014 · 1 · · Ch. 3: Uh, Oh! ·

5437961 Amen to that. All of it.

5437854 I apologize if I came off as especially rude. It's just that the general assumption is that writers come here to not only have fun, but also improve their craft. The part where I pointed out the van was just meant to be a lighthearted joke, and the part about the Mary Sue was meant to help the writer avoid making those mistakes in the future.

With the lyrics of the song, I was just being blunt. I hardly ever read song lyrics in a story except for when they're implemented for humor.

I even tried to be helpful by pointing your daughter in the right direction of a group that is tailored for new writers.

I'm sorry if we offended you in any way, but it's important to remember that the majority of users on this site are either adults or older teenagers. They tend to have a bit more of a sophisticated taste when it comes to stories.

Also, on the topic of calling someome out when they're doing something wrong, I point you to season four episode 23: Inspiration Manifestation. It may not perfectly illustrate the situation, but I do believe that it captures that basics. It's important to tell someone when they aren't doing something right before it gets out of hand. Again, sorry if I came off as rude in doing so.

The Guardian and Friends

The Guardian and Friends #8 · Dec 29th, 2014 · · · Ch. 3: Uh, Oh! ·

5438132

D'aw, thanks!

ShadowblazeCR

ShadowblazeCR #9 · Dec 29th, 2014 · 1 · · Ch. 3: Uh, Oh! ·

5437854

It may be for children, but we've taken it to heart and seen some things in it that the regular demographic wouldn't understand. And why would we be judgmental for feeling better for ourselves when we know that we've done better. Most people think trollfics are these kind of stories. Ones that are so bad that you think that the author knows better and wouldn't it without knowing it was bad. And I feel like you just called us stupid with that last sentence. As my friend Gaurdian said. Role playing is banned. Maybe you would've known more about that if you'd done some research. Actually you'd have known a lick of non-stereotypical information about us if you'd done any research.

I'd think that'd be pretty obvious as it's the title of the show. How much have you watched the show and explored this site, hmm? Let's just say there's a reason there's a age requirement and the mature option. Panda yes there is. We just give honest opinions.

Till the next one

-R

TurboTheGameGuy