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They say misery loves company. Not quite. I love Misery's company.

KillerRobotQuote Joined 29th Sep, 2013 · Offline

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Galaxy Knight
Galaxy Knight #1 · Dec 22nd, 2014 · · ·
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I am the first. While the story is cute and it's written very well it feels like the story starts and then it ends, it's not too long and there's no build. Heck, there's practically no foreplay.
Still a very good story though.

coolstorybrah
coolstorybrah #2 · Dec 22nd, 2014 · · ·
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good story!
it was kind of rushed though... but still awesome!

Dudeler
Dudeler #3 · Dec 22nd, 2014 · · ·
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Nice story. Clop was good, but like 5412289 mentioned, it just came and gone. Besides the smooching and grinding in the beginning, there was hardly any foreplay to build up arousal. It's still good, but I feel more could be added into it.

VvendettaV
VvendettaV #4 · Dec 26th, 2014 · · ·
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Its was ok,the story was there then it ends,nothing to cloppy and no foreplay but its like what i would expect from a first time clop writer.its ok

GameQubb
GameQubb #5 · Feb 19th, 2015 · · ·
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Now this is what I like to see, true love ending with a little fun under the covers. The was perfect.

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