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Someone a guy once said: You can't write clop in only 1000 words.
I'd dare say that you need 2500 words minimum to have it work.
Kinda full of cliches and you really need to learn to show not tell
I think it's too fast-paced.
Also, an orgasm that lasted several minutes? Something like that would probably drown Rainbow Dash! Damn...
1k words? Exactly? Hmm, interesting.
Generic SoarinDash Fic #397-
Rating: Poor.
LOL
Great story keep . And how long did soarins cum last, because several minuts DAMN
rainbodash's clit must be drownded 
Doesn't matter if its an overused pairing. Its still one of the best in the fandom. Short but sweet, could use a bit of adjustments here and there, but overall not bad. you get 3 spike's for your work good sir.
One of the oldest pairings I've seen. Sweet and short, you might say. A little tweak, here and there, and it would have been better.
Kaiser Wilhelm II of Germany just read your erotic story. Kasier Wilhelm the Second. He enjoyed it too. How do you feel about that?
this escolated really fast and it wasn't really a clop fic if its 1,000 words the others i have read don't really have 1000 words cus they usually have like 6,000 or more you might want to explane the story a little better then it would be better but it was an okay story
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I wish it was longer but i did like this fic. Imma like it