Well, I sure didn't expect some girl to just show up out of nowhere. Poor girl. She's got to have amnesia, or something, (although she insists she doesn't) because even though she looks to be about my age, she's claiming that she isn't human. Or wasn't. Great, she's delusional, too.
But you know what? That's okay. She's a nice girl. She just seems to be confused. I suppose I can let her stay a while until she sorts things out.
WARNING: Strong language
Fluttershy picture by SmokeFlare
Chapters (3)
It's fun trying to formulate whatever accent this guy has in my head.
I like it.
Please, continue.
I like it and I want read more. Please sir, I want some more chapters. Sorry I just had to do an Oliver Twist joke
Self insert and the first line is: "The last thing I expected to see was a naked girl lying on my back porch."
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On the plus side the layout is decent and I always approve of that. Now back to the downside, don't base a character entirely off yourself, it almost never works. Take aspects of yourself and use that. I could be a lot meaner but I really don't want to be that guy.
I like this srory so far, the self insert isn't bad dispite what some ponies may believe, as long as you can pull it off you'll be fine.
I'll be lookin for the next update...
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Thanks for the feedback.
4066568 NO!...Thank you for ackowledging my existence!
Mmhh, anything about human fluttershy i'l read it :D.
4066585 Anything about Fluttershy I'll read. Anthro, pony, evil (I have plans.... Fluttershy can be a real bloodsucker....).
Yeah... im from wisconsin, you sound like youre from minnesota or michigan.
4066643 hehehe lol, okay, give it your best shot, bro :P
4066643 i'll rape her if I have to, i'l read anything of fluttershy, sex gore anthro human sexuality her with a dick and etc...
Dude,good first chapter :D
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Please. Never say words like that again....
4066958 okay hehehe... was that a joke? Or was it seriously? The truth man
Another one of these types of stories, huh? Arright; let's see where this goes!
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........ Yes
4066728 I guess most of us would. XD
Very interesting .Write on, develop more chapters. You have peaked my curiosity. Good job so far. I wonder what will happen...
4070289 Originality? Heh, you give me too much credit. But thank you, though.
You had my interest, and you now have my attention. Can't wait to see where this goes
He's probably not gonna believe her name us Fluttershy, considering actual people don't have names like that. XD
This is gonna be delicious... and first of, She reminds me of Tsumugi Kotobuki from K-ON
4067622 lol most of us XD
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There are people named things as stupid as Hashtag. Are you sure about that?
4071101 Then he Googles Fluttershy.
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actually, it's a whole genre, "Pony on Earth" abbreviated PoE, usually.
There's even a fimfic group about it
4070369 Like the story thus far and also that your protagonist knows nothing of MLP:FiM--don't know why but I never seem to like those fanfics for some reason.
Keep up the good work, and I hope to read more soon!
Love it! Keep up the good work, and like fluttershy said, try to not swear so much... It really gets on my nerves when very other word is a swear...
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That's my name irl
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I love this question. It's very Fluttershy-like and utterly wrong at the same time. Everyone is dangerous. It all depends on how far we are pushed. That includes Shy, as well. When the need to protect her friends overweights her shyness, nothing can stop her.
The correct question would be "Are you a threat?", I suppose. That's what I would ask. But hey, I'm not Fluttershy, nor am I close to having her kind of personality.
FAVORITE!
I NEED MORRRREREEEEE
A favorite and a follow for you, good sir. I hope to read the future chapters to this because, well...
It seems absolutely adorable.
~Golden
A great start. I read and favourited this morning, but was rushed for college. So yeah, like I said, good start. Can't wait for more
I like the concept but...I HATE SEXUAL AND 18+ CONTENT!!
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Theeeeen don't read stories that have it, and also try to avoid the internet. Besides, the story hasn't even done that yet. Nudity isn't sexual content.
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MOOORRREEE!!!!NOOOOWWWW!!!!
Interesting, keep it up!
"It's not even good." Incorrect. There just isn't enough of it.
You're right, it's crap. But I wanna see where this will go
This is good, it's not bad. I could use with a bit less swearing, like in the first chapter though. Interesting. But keep posting chapters!
HELLO MY FELLOW MIDWESTERN!
4086464 Saying it's crap but not saying why doesn't help me. I appreciate criticism as long as I can use it to improve my writing. The better question, though, is why you want to see where this goes if you don't like it.
4086594 I never said I didn't like it
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