"You're a human. Can you even give her the love she needs?" Seriously Twilight? Dick move. Now Mason's going to spend the next three plus chapters moping and doubting his worth and relationship with Scootaloo.
5442369 Mason is a total unknown to them. Scootaloo is a close friend who they've always worried about, and now found out came from a seriously broken family. And they've seen her being very attached to him in the past few days. She is simply very concerned about her.
At this point, I can't help but wonder what happened to Scootaloo's mom. She was at the house when Whipwind attacked Scoots and AB, but wasn't there when AJ, Mac, and Mason searched the place. Where did she go?
5543790 Hey man, wings suck. They always gloss over the issue with some lame hand wave and nobody ever thinks it through... you are not getting that fucking shirt on with wings. No no, you can stop pointing at the slit or hole barely big enough for the wing base right now because you are never fitting the rest of the damn wing through that thing. Wings, total pain in the ass. Especially when they don't even work leaving you ground bound... You know, because humans are horrifically unaerodynamic. Why, a hominid would need major mystic mojo to get airborne... far more than poor Mason could possibly have gotten from a few CCs of pegasus blood.... otherwise they would have fixed Scootaloo's lack of said magic that way and there would have never been a problem. Provided you ignore the fact that Scootaloo had plenty of her mother's blood flowing through her in the womb.
Well, if he can't they're fucked anyway. Scoots would have to have her heart torn out if he didn't love her and if he tried to pull away to "protect" shed be heartbroken anyway.
I honestly have trouble understanding his panic about the wings. First off, he knew he was going to mutate in some way. And the way Celestia put it, he probably had like me some Frankenstein vision in a way about how he would look. Only wings seems like a really small change and I would more expect a sigh of relief. Secondly, this are wings we are talking about and many humans would probably kill for a nice pair of them. But that's just my opinion.
This has to be THE best chapter so far! I mean WOW!!! Thats the only way I can think to describe it. The whole story so far has been amazing but this has to be one of my favorites so far, if not my #1 favorite. I dont really know bc the one of Mason and Scoots together and Scoots telling Mason the truth about her home life was really amazing too. I still wish I could punch Whipwind in the nose as hard as I can for what he did to Scoots and Dash and what Masons going through. If only I had just a tenth of the talent as an author. Please never stop writing bc if you do the world will be a much dimmer place.
Can't really relate, honestly. If I were in his place, I would be crying in joy. I mean, spending a few weeks, maybe months in pain, but then be able to fly like a bird? totally worth it.
10188273 I know right I was like mason STFU! Why the buck would you freak out about growing some wings? Seriously it's just gonna make you 20% more AWESOME!!! if I was him I'd be grinning like an idiot at the fact I was growing WINGS!!
I'd also be 6'6" instead of 5'6" but that's neither here nor there lol
...and ruined. This just feels like a prelude to him turning into a pony. As soon as I read about Whipwind's blood I was done. Damn shame. I'd mostly enjoyed the story up to this point.
"You're a human. Can you even give her the love she needs?"
Seriously Twilight? Dick move. Now Mason's going to spend the next three plus chapters moping and doubting his worth and relationship with Scootaloo.
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Nah, they're both stronger than that.
Angel Mason
5442369 Mason is a total unknown to them. Scootaloo is a close friend who they've always worried about, and now found out came from a seriously broken family. And they've seen her being very attached to him in the past few days. She is simply very concerned about her.
"Can you give her the love she needs?" Twilight said, continuing "We must put you to a test. Luna, get the lubricant."
5442687 Cadence would have the good stuff. But the Crystal Empire might be a tad far...
5442687 i am both confused and unnerved by your comment and im terrified to understand its implications.
run Mason, run!
Wings are fine but please no human turned pony
Please, when his wings grow in, make them white. Orange wings would just be really weird.
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Thank you for that! It means a lot to me
5443677 Agreed.
HOOKED!
"I already do that! You ponies are all racist!"
5520628 "and like, GODDAMN, I don't want these wings, I mean, walking is already a burden, now I have to FLY?!?!, FUCK YOU PONIES!"
*shoots self*
Bro, this story...this story right herr..FREAKING AMAZING SO FAR!
At this point, I can't help but wonder what happened to Scootaloo's mom. She was at the house when Whipwind attacked Scoots and AB, but wasn't there when AJ, Mac, and Mason searched the place. Where did she go?
5543790 Hey man, wings suck. They always gloss over the issue with some lame hand wave and nobody ever thinks it through... you are not getting that fucking shirt on with wings. No no, you can stop pointing at the slit or hole barely big enough for the wing base right now because you are never fitting the rest of the damn wing through that thing. Wings, total pain in the ass. Especially when they don't even work leaving you ground bound... You know, because humans are horrifically unaerodynamic. Why, a hominid would need major mystic mojo to get airborne... far more than poor Mason could possibly have gotten from a few CCs of pegasus blood.... otherwise they would have fixed Scootaloo's lack of said magic that way and there would have never been a problem. Provided you ignore the fact that Scootaloo had plenty of her mother's blood flowing through her in the womb.
I sometime think myself as mason when I am reading this . This story is amazing
That was awesome read Im happy thay are all ok.And with all hes been throw to elp save her of course he can love her.
Why wouldn't he want to grow wings? Given the circumstances, wings sound like the best kind of change for the body.
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Well, if he can't they're fucked anyway. Scoots would have to have her heart torn out if he didn't love her and if he tried to pull away to "protect" shed be heartbroken anyway.
I honestly have trouble understanding his panic about the wings. First off, he knew he was going to mutate in some way. And the way Celestia put it, he probably had like me some Frankenstein vision in a way about how he would look. Only wings seems like a really small change and I would more expect a sigh of relief. Secondly, this are wings we are talking about and many humans would probably kill for a nice pair of them. But that's just my opinion.
for a second we thought he was going to be a stage three Anthro. Looks like just state one though.
This has to be THE best chapter so far! I mean WOW!!! Thats the only way I can think to describe it. The whole story so far has been amazing but this has to be one of my favorites so far, if not my #1 favorite. I dont really know bc the one of Mason and Scoots together and Scoots telling Mason the truth about her home life was really amazing too. I still wish I could punch Whipwind in the nose as hard as I can for what he did to Scoots and Dash and what Masons going through.
If only I had just a tenth of the talent as an author. Please never stop writing bc if you do the world will be a much dimmer place.
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It's more like:
He's got wings now, after all.
Can't really relate, honestly. If I were in his place, I would be crying in joy. I mean, spending a few weeks, maybe months in pain, but then be able to fly like a bird? totally worth it.
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I know right I was like mason STFU! Why the buck would you freak out about growing some wings? Seriously it's just gonna make you 20% more AWESOME!!! if I was him I'd be grinning like an idiot at the fact I was growing WINGS!!
I'd also be 6'6" instead of 5'6" but that's neither here nor there lol
...and ruined. This just feels like a prelude to him turning into a pony. As soon as I read about Whipwind's blood I was done. Damn shame. I'd mostly enjoyed the story up to this point.
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I mean, did you see the cover art for this fic?
he has the dna of an asshole father now... hope that dosent translate over to him