this is a sweet chapter, knowing that your friends are there beside you even in your vulnerable state is a great feeling. i cant wait to see if he can fly.
*ahem* Although they're not white wings which maek me sad, I'm interested in seeing how the rest of this plays out. I wonder when fan art depicting the wings will appear, too.
5448154 If I could draw worth a damn, I would. Although, I'm the kind of guy who doesn't necessarily need to like something to do it, I just need to be inspired by it.
5635420 ... did you not read the section between meeting Whipwind and Mason waking up at SAA? 'Cause NocturnalEmissions saltybedspackle was practically putting up 'Dark & Edgy!' posters. The wing thing is really less 'edginess intensifying' and more 'Stu level up'. Hopefully he won't go full Stu and save the day from some enemy that can easily curbstomp the established heroes and brush off the magic bullet superweapon that has been proven to trump everything unless a Gary Stu needs an excuse to be extra badass... That would be bad. And have no business being in a story whose only subject tags are Romance and Human, so we should be safe... What are the odds the author would discard his own tags twice in such a short story? Especially when it is already as fast paced as this?
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Thank you so much for your likes and support of my story. I am thankful for your interest and look forward to exploring it with you all!
The feels man the feels to great heart giving out. Hnnnnnngh.
this is a sweet chapter, knowing that your friends are there beside you even in your vulnerable state is a great feeling. i cant wait to see if he can fly.
That's beautiful keep it up.
Two chapters in a day? Suhweeeet.
*ahem* Although they're not white wings which maek me sad, I'm interested in seeing how the rest of this plays out. I wonder when fan art depicting the wings will appear, too.
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I can't imagine that someone would like my story enough to make art... really.. that blows my mind.
And I couldn't do pure white wings... Mason isn't that pure
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If I could draw worth a damn, I would. Although, I'm the kind of guy who doesn't necessarily need to like something to do it, I just need to be inspired by it.
AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWW! I was hoping they'd be bigger.
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Have faith.... they might not be done growing yet
Dem fealz.
God damn dude, the way you were able to describe it makes me wonder if you went through this experience in real life!
I love where this is going and cant wait to read more!
thats it! going out and getting bit by a bleeding pegasus!
"Blood" red and dark grey? Aren't you shooting a bit close to "dark and edgy"?
Are they going to get any bigger?
5635420 ... did you not read the section between meeting Whipwind and Mason waking up at SAA? 'Cause
NocturnalEmissionssaltybedspackle was practically putting up 'Dark & Edgy!' posters. The wing thing is really less 'edginess intensifying' and more 'Stu level up'. Hopefully he won't go full Stu and save the day from some enemy that can easily curbstomp the established heroes and brush off the magic bullet superweapon that has been proven to trump everything unless a Gary Stu needs an excuse to be extra badass... That would be bad. And have no business being in a story whose only subject tags are Romance and Human, so we should be safe... What are the odds the author would discard his own tags twice in such a short story? Especially when it is already as fast paced as this?That was a awesome read .His wings are awesome.
5530552 I agree wholeheartedly and volunteer to come with you! The pay off would be more than worth the pain!
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I would like to come with you as well, it would definitely be worth it
Is it strange that I gave the doctor the voice of Voyager's EMH while reading his part?
Huh... He merged with Ho-Oh.
And this triggered the hug...
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5530552 same
5530552 gasp.... it's like a zombie bite but you stay human
7431997 being bitten by a pony makes you want to eat grains.
CALL AN EMT! TWILIGHT HAS SEVERE BURNS!
nope...
prismatic? Well, there's purple in it!
Great description of the process, and one of the best wing descriptions I have read. I can almost see them
Wait! He can taste love!? So this means the Whipwind that was petrified was really a CHANGELING!!