I just found this story 3 days ago. 7 hours total time to finish to this point. I can say this story is really good I find it to be fast past with a good plot line to it, and I must say I was a bit concerned about having scootaloo in a sex scene but you pull it off really.
with a new Villon coming in to play at the end of this chapter(vary good cliff hanger) I am hoping you are planning on this running for several more chapters. as to the rest of the cmc in the room when mason and scootaloo make love I say go for it you are vary good at pulling this story to gather so fare lest see what you can do under that kind of a stressful event. harts fire
Borrow?? I thought. A lewd image of the three of them rolling around in bed with me flashed through my mind. I would be lying if it didn't excite me a little.
Poor kid.,.his mind has became a something...adult. oh well. *reading*
Come on mason! Kick that thing's buttocks and save those fillies, the power of love compels you!
I ussualy dont like when people add their own elwments of somthing, but you did it right.
Good god, he has masterbated enough that when sweetie offers him her horn, that is the exact motion that he goes to...
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What else would you do to gently caress an 8 inch horn if given the chance?
5489372 you make a good point, now im wondering if it is possible to jack off a horn in this story. Hint hint, nudge nudge, cough cough...
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Patience... I gotta figure out how to get everypony home safe, first... if at all.
This might turn into a second book if it keeps up like this!
5489397 what i like about this character is that he is exactly the same as me with his emotions and reactions with a different name. Yay!
Absorbing people? That's some creepy shit right there.
This will be interesting, that the least I can say.
I just found this story 3 days ago.
7 hours total time to finish to this point.
I can say this story is really good I find it to be fast past with a good plot line to it, and I must say I was a bit concerned about having scootaloo in a sex scene but you pull it off really.
with a new Villon coming in to play at the end of this chapter(vary good cliff hanger) I am hoping you are planning on this running for several more chapters.
as to the rest of the cmc in the room when mason and scootaloo make love I say go for it you are vary good at pulling this story to gather so fare lest see what you can do under that kind of a stressful event.
harts fire
Poor kid.,.his mind has became a something...adult. oh well. *reading*
All I've got to say is, it looks like mason has got him self into a massive "what the hell?" situation, with a little bit of "Oh fuck!" mixed.
"After all, you're out of family members now! Well... except for your mother, but she stopped existing after that one scene where she first appeared."
5489372 Scootaloo! I choose you! Attack with: Blowjob!
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It's super effective!!
That was a awesome and sweet read ,And that was a awesome first fly,I loved it but that end WTLF.!!!
-Ru
Then the world would be bathed in brilliant hate during the day.
Very nice bait and switch at the end of the chapter.