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Work on punctuation
Not bad...I like it.
world with colored, taking ponies, then [talking]
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Thank you.
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Kind of what happens when you don't have anybody to proofread for you, and you're not the best at writing.
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Fixed it. Thank you.
5344922 My comment was a tip, I wasn't scolding you… I let you notice this just in case you got the wrong idea. Your story isn't bad by the way, it just needs improvement.
5345009 No, I understand. I knew there would be issues I didn't find myself. If finding a proofreader was easier there wouldn't be as many.
Not bad. I do like how the ponies aren't all wowed by the human. First time I've actually given a second person fic a chance.
5346986 My thought kind of is that, If you live in a magical land where almost everything talks, or does magic, or breaths fire, controls the very fabric of reality, or tries to destroy you with a magical laser beam, you wouldn't be all that surprised by yet another talking creature.
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Exactly my thinking. Maybe some like Twilight could be interested, but not more than a scientist who discovers some new species of frog.
Holy Celestia xD, thisis gonna be intrestjng
Bedside manner, what's that?