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Neat idea
Good job
This story maaay need a 'Dark' tag. It's pretty creepy. So have an upvote for making my creepy sense tingle.
Oh shitttt
Damn. This was awesome!
Creative idea, though. Was it inspired?
So... Vinyl is the Equestrian Killgrave? That's kind of awesome! Would that make Octavia Jessica Jones?
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Fuck... I didn't even notice that while writing this...
7528177 No, dude, it's cool! I love this idea!
Dang.....
I like this story.
I thought this was great! Any possibility of a connecting story?
A bit predictable, but great story! I loved her 'voice', and how you told it.
7528208 Yeah, I agree with that. The ending seemed rather rushed.
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I'm finding I don't entirely know how to end a story correctly. The ending always seems "rushed".
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Yeah, I have the exact same issue, don't worry.
DAYUM!!!!!!
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My thoughts exactly
Well.
That's a thing then.
Even though the ending was kinda rushed, I liked it. It adds a bit of character to Vinyl if you ask me. How she is always concise and whatnot.
6/10 on the Yogi scale. Good job man, and keep it up!
Sincerely,
Yogi