• Member Since 8th Nov, 2014
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Your typical Brony that loves chaos and fear. That is trying to please you with his writing.


Evil is coming.
They may not be able to stop it.
Equestria has one chance left.
An idea that Celestia is unsure to do.
As it may breaks Celestia and Luna hearts.
It may also break someone else heart.
Will it be enough?
If they fail then evil wins.
But if they win.
There victory shall be a prize better then anything else.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 10 )

Thank you. Out of the 3 stories I'm doing this was the hardest. I be sure to write more when I can

This was really good!

Oh this is gonna be good.

Wait. It's been awhile since I read the first chapter but wasn't there something about if they summoned him it would take him from his family and friends with no way back? Also, why are they acting like he's an animal? He can understand them, even if he can't talk he still has a name yet they've decided that they get to choose his name without his opinion in it. Yes, he could have done something if he didn't like it since he was behind them, but it's the principle of the matter, they weren't giving him a choice in it.

Take him from his family and friends? What?

5446535 Sorry. Rambling, it's been a long time since I read the first chapter, and I might have been thinking about a different story, but I thought what their mother told Celestia about the person was that if they summoned him it would be taking him from his friends and family without a way back. Again, I was probably thinking about a different story. I just ramble a lot when my mouth/fingers move faster than my brain.

It is ok to ramble. As to your thought. I said he would get his heart broken.

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