• Member Since 8th Nov, 2014
  • offline last seen Oct 31st, 2021


Your typical Brony that loves chaos and fear. That is trying to please you with his writing.


What would you do?
A filly wonders into Ponyvillie. Cold, hungry and scared. You would help the filly. Even if the residents hate her because she accidentally uses Dark magic? Even if Twilight wants to study her? Against her will?
No one should grow up like this.
I shall give her warmth, food, water and most important love.
No matter what!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 21 )

A good story but there are parts that are gramatically incorrect, If english is not your first language I would recommend getting an English speaker to proof read you work (e.g 'An hard days work' should be 'A hard days work')

It's always the cliff hanger :ajbemused:

this is a very good story so far, and I can't wait to read more of it too. :pinkiehappy:

I like it... could be better but that will be said about all most everything. So as it is... I like it, a lot.

Twilight: "Oh why do your care! Hmm! Just because she is one of an kind like you! You two are made for testing!"


Twilight: "I...I didn't mean it...Stop!...you got that look in your eye!...Please...I'm sorry...Please...Ple-"


that was he first thing that came into my head when I read that

More please? :fluttershysad:

We require additional chapters!:yay:

Also, that was pretty dark of twilight, kinda difficult reading her say that, having a one track mind towards research? Absolutely, but saying such hurtful things? Mmmmrrrrmmmmm...
I assume everyone might be somewhat out of character for the sake of story progression?:applecry:

I know people/ponies/etc...want more chapters and I really do want to work on them but life stuff been popping up now and then. However since this story is getting a lot of request. I drop the new story I'm writing on and focus working on this one instead.
So we can allllllllll be happy.


Maybe you overdid it a little. I mean, you have 17 stories, where you only just begun writing! It is probably hard to not get lost in so many stories, but since they are out, it is hard to change that now I guess.

But maybe you should try to focus on a limited amount of stories for now. Might get hard to update otherwise. However, you shouldn't stress yourself with the updates either. Take your time. Nothing good can come out, if you are writing under pressure. :twilightsmile:

Don't forget the stories I haven't published! XD

5998982 more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Is this story dead?

This is such a great story...

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