It is nightmare night and Mirrors get a surprise gift from Futtershy in her bat pony custom. But something about the way she looks at him is strange and...hungry. The way her red eyes and three pink bat cutie mark was beautiful.
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I'm sorry to say it but your sentence flow is horrible! You should consider getting a proofreader.
6594196 Tried to but no one replied back. So I just said 'fuck it, I'll deal with it later.'
6594275 That is honestly a horrible idea. It's better to take longer to release a story and have it get a good revival than to rush it out and have 5 up-6 down on the first day.
See, this is a perfect example of why writers should reread their own work before they post it.
Seriously?
Because grammar is hard.
This isn't even a complete sentence.
...and now I'm beginning to wonder if you actually do know the difference between "colt" and "clot".
Oh, look -- we have another sentence fragment here.
Is English even your first language?
The word "custom" is not the same as the word "costume"; learn the difference.
6595542 I agree with ya dude, feels like a kindergartner on crack could do better than this
I'm guessing English isn't your first language?
6594275 I'm sorry but this is not worthy of a favorite and I'm really lenient when it comes to that
7987426 That fine, I know it's bad.