Nightmare night surprised

by Sand Storm

First published

It is nightmare night and Mirrors get a surprise gift from Futtershy in her bat pony custom. But something about the way she looks at him is strange and...hungry. The way her red eyes and three pink bat cutie mark was beautiful.

It is nightmare night and Mirrors get a surprise gift from Futtershy in her bat pony custom. But something about the way she looks at him is strange and...hungry. The way her red eyes and three pink bat cutie mark was beautiful.

Chapter 1

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"Okay so I might have taken the wrong path." Mirrors said to himself as he continues he way through the Everfree forest. It's Nightmare Night, a special time of the year were clot and fillies would give their candy to a statue of Nightmare Moon. Mirrors was dressed as a vampony, similar to fluttershy's. Anyways, Twilight has told him to meet the others at the hill but he didn't asked for detraction as he could just fly over to it. That was mistake. Apparently there's are two hills, one where that the ponies might not know about.

"Well this is just great." Mirrors said to himself deadpanned as he landed on the top of the hill near the cliff, resting by a large boulder that sat to the side on the cliff. As he was landing, he didn't noticed another pony following him. As he landed, he noticed a shadow that didn't belongs to him. Deciding to dismissed it. He turned towards the full moon that shined high in the sky. He watched as the starry sky glowed. He did hear the grass crunch behind him but didn't bother to look nor the figure approaching him. The figure looked at him strangely wondering what he is looking at.

The Moon.


(Stranger's POV)

The figure was a dark yellow mare with three pink bat cutie mark, pink messy mane, two fangs pointing out of her mouth, two cherry or crimson red eyes, nice curves, and a plumped rump. She wondered why was he looking at the moon? It was beautiful and grand but not what she was here for. She was here for her mate, which this pony on the hill.

'I thought he said he wouldn't be here till later?' She thought to herself but shrugged.

'Better now than later.' she told herself shrugging. Making her way to him she stopped as remember what her mate had asked her.

'Can you do that little dance of your's I love show much.' his voice echoed in her head. Smiling, she quietly flapped her wings trying her best to not get noticed. Flying above, she flew past the stop he was resting at. Looking closely as she past, she could see that his eyes were closed.

'Is he sleeping?' She thought to herself. Flying far even to be noticeably and can be hear, she let out a loud screech. Her 'mate' jumped up awake. He looked around searching to where the sound came from. He stood up, wings bore. Smiling at his fame, she then began dance.


(Mirror's POV)

'Okay, what the heck was that noise?' He thought as he looked around. Spreading his wings, carefully to not shoot out the fake bat wings that are covering his.

'Maybe it was just one of the clots or fillies screaming from a scare.' he thought to himself. Looking around for anything that wasn't there when he napped but nothing seem different.

'I should get back with Fluttershy, she might be having a panic attack. Hope she doesn't get mad for m-!' He thought was interrupted by a low hum. Twitching his ears in different direction. Hearing the humming upwards, he looked towards the shiny moon.

There in the moon light was a pegasus flying beautifully around. She was...what looks like a dance, she moved though the air like it was a dance floor. Her movements were like a belly-dance fix with one of those ballroom or even a nightclub dance moves. She moved her hips like a calm river. She looked at him as she dance away but it would seem like she was getting closer. Landing on all fours while landing on the edge of the cliff, she stared at him with her bright red eyes. Mirrors was staring mouth agape and not looking away as she moved closer. Purring and winked to him, she give a quick shake of her hips as she turned to show him her back. Spreading her wings, she smirked as he slowly made his way to her. He could feel something bouncing below him, the mare looked down smiling at his large erection. It bounced as he walked towards her, she bend over and lifts her tail up showing her winking lips. Mirrors stopped and blushed as she swayed it slowly, egging him to go on.

'Come on Big boy, full mom-ma til she could walk.' She said but came out as a series of hisses. Mirrors tilted his head at her hisses.

"What did you say?" He asked her. The mare looked at him sharply before turning face to face with him. It was Fluttershy in her custom.

'What did she call herself again? Flutterbat.' Mirrors thought. Mirrors stared as 'Flutterbat' walked closer and looked at him before smirking.

"Trying to act so innocent. I like that." She cooed in a series of hisses. Mirrors stood there trying to reply but was to in trance by her beauty.

Flutterbat sashay toward him. With a sway in her step, and the little bounce in her hips in time with the swish of her tail. Flutterbat moved closer well he back. He watched her sway, followed the curve of her hips, the slight jiggle in her step. Flutterbat was closing their gape between them. Mirrors's shaft twitched as she draws near just inches away.

"Ready sweetie?" She hissed. Mirrors not sure to what to said but nodding thinking it was something good. Turning around Flutterbat pushed her ass before him, Mirrors lifted his hooves and start off slowly, caressing lovely at the curves of her cheeks. Flutterbat moaned in as his hooves moved towards her thighs and thick legs. Flutterbat felt his fully erected member bobbed with his beating heart. He then opened his mouth and let out his tongue go to work, search deep, slathering between her cheeks at the supple flesh. Flutterbat moaned loudly pushing her ass further back against his face, shoving his tongue deeper in her. Thoughts were racing though his head. Mounting her and showing who's the real boss.

"Ohhhh~!" She moaned as she grounded against his rod. Flutterbat cum all over his nuzzle. Her juices rushed down his mouth, swallowing what little cum in. Flutterbat pulled back, stopping just above his member.

With a flick of her tail, she thrusted downward shoving his cock into her pussy. Mirrors's hips thrusting of their own accord, Flutterbat sidled up and down his length.

"Ahhh!" Mirrors yelled in surprise as how tight she was. His hooves could not help but tightly grip the sides of her wide, yellow flanks. His hooves digs deeply into her thick, bountiful mounds of flesh from her buttcheeks. Still squeezing in, pushing him down against the rock.

"F-Fuck" He moaned as his chest laid on her back. She thrust his dick with her pressure and blushed heavily, moaning as his member poked at her womb. She rose her rear for a bit to let her dripping lips moist his member. Flutterbat rode him faster as he pressed closer to her. Rubbing her ass on him with wide but gentle strides. Mirrors thrusted harder as his grip tighten, she then slowly shifted her hips and rhythmically pressed in against his crotch. Pre began to flow out of her as his effects of pleasing her increased.

'Don't stop!' She screamed. Mirrors pulled half way out before thrusted back forcefully.

"Ahhh!" They moaned. Loud Slaps were heard as they got more wild up. Flutterbat then abruptly thrust her supple flank back against Mirrors's thighs, gyrating her hips a little.

"I'm going to fuck you till you pregnant." He said lusty to her, making her wings spread out in lust. His wings did the same over lapping hers.

'Yesss~, make me you bitch and whore.' She cooed well pushing back towards his cock, overcome with lust.

Mirrors smiled before thrusting faster making her rear ripple with every thrust. Her fat ass bouncing up and down on his lap and over his now wet dick takes hold of her sluttish buttcheeks and force his length in deep, bottoming out inside her thumbing ass. He remained inside her, Flutterbat begins gyrated her hips, rubbing against the force that is turning her.

"Fuck yes!!" He yelled as his black dick throbbed inside her, shooting his cum into her womb as she cum equally. Pulling out, he fell on his back as his 'mate' laid on her face-down ass-up.

Mirrors laid there breathing heavily as the cool night air brushed against his still erected member. 'Flutterbat' gave out small moans as her pussy throbbed, feeling the shadow thrust of her mate. She yelped with a hearty moan each time the tip of his throbbing, nearly vibrating penis hit the edge of her womb. Breathing peacefully, she slowly raised up and turned towards her mate. He was currently resting.

'Not yet you not' She thought before limping towards him.

'Wow, he really did a number on me.' she thought as her legs felt so numb. Making her way, she could help but inhale his musk. Purring slutty, she got near his cum covered dick. She smiled as she smelled his and her juice.

'don't mind if I do' She hissed before licked her lips seductively.

"MMMmmmm.. " she moaned while deepthroating his cock. Mirrors's member twitched as Flutterbat's warm, wet mouth engulf his hard cock, taking him all the way to the balls, tracing his length along her tongue. Mirrors slightly pumped his cock while she sucked him using her lips. She bobbed her head up, sucking gently, using her tongue cover his member with her saliva. Mirrors moaned as small amount of pre was sucked and swallowed, Flutterbat's hooves played with herself as she sucked him. Unnoticed by the two, Mirrors's tribal marking began to glow a tint of cyan.

"Keep going bitch." Mirrors moaned. Flutterbat quicken her pace while keeping her teeth and fangs away from his penis. Bobbing her plump lips up and down, his balls swelling abit bigger at the amount of semen ready to be devoured by his whorse. She slurped and sucked his dick, as his tongue lipped out.

'Lets see how you like this.' she thought before plunging down his whole length, picking up speed. Mirrors's eyes shot open as her pace quicken

"OHHHHH~" He moaned. Flutterbat pulled out before giving slow licks, sucking and kissing focused on his sensitive head. Her face moved up and down his shaft, pumping in and out. After on one finale bob, she pulled out and slammed her pussy down on his girth.

"AHHHHHH~!!!" Mirrors moaned in pleasure. He pushed his mast into her heavenly gate all slick and dripping, the tight nether lips suckling his malehood as he pushed all himself into her, burying his girth into that perfect tight ass. Mirrors continued to pound her bouncy ass as she bounces on him. Flutterbat moan as his member poked at her womb, as she pushed herself further down.

"Fuck fuck fuck~" Mirrors screamed. Mirrors grinds himself up against her flanks. Flutterbat bit down on her bottom lip and clenched her eyes shut as he began thrust in and out of her almost violently, her fat ass bouncing up and down slapping his legs.

"I'M CUMMMING!!!!" He yelled before bring her close in for a kiss. Flutterbat moaned as his tongue attack her's, thrusting her hips she milks his cock as it pours semen into her now overfilled womb. The two continued to thrust and milk each other as they made out.


Both of their bodies began to tire out making them stop rutting each other. As they pulled away from each other leaving only a trail a saliva, Flutterbat's legs gave out. She laid on his chest breath hard with her eyes closed, trying her best to get up but to no eval. She gave out a small whimper as pain shot through her. Mirrors watched as she tries to get up and fight though the pain she's in. Thinking of where to rest, he placed her on his back and flaw towards a near by pound. Getting there was easily now comes the hard part. Opening a portal to his room.

"Looks like no ones home." He said to himself. Looking over his should on his back to her his 'marefriend' is he noticed that she has fallen a sleep. Moving to the edge of the pond, he looked down as his tribal marks moved off his body and into his refection, creating a portal to his room. Slowly lowering himself in ordered to keep 'Fluttershy' from falling off. As he exited out of a full Celestia sized mirror, he walked towards his bed and laid her down. Pulling the covers over them, he cuddled her near him. 'Fluttershy' smiled as he nuzzled her before falling a sleep.

Unknown to the little surprise growing inside her womb.