During a pleasantly uneventful day in Ponyville, Princess Twilight Sparkle is surprised to discover that her day is about to become far more interesting.
Old enemies will reappear, old teachers will suggest murder as a form of diplomacy, and old cheese will never be the same again.
Join Twilight as she decides for herself whether pure evil can be friendly or if it just needs to die, cold and alone.
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Okay I'm not gonna say much other than, I had fun with this. I will admit first and foremost I was inspired by other stories, but I have no intention of copying them... much.
(Currently on hiatus until season five)
Now here are the end credits.
The Alicorn Filly was partially made by me but mostly made HERE
Twilight was found HERE
and the Background was found HERE
I'll see you all at the next chapter.
I think this might be what you're looking for.
5148258 Excellent! Thank you very much.
very interesting idea i like it! also i see you channel discord very well. ^_^
5148411 Well I've never claimed to be the best at writing Discord, but I always figured as long as I'm having fun when I write him then I'm probably doing something right. Still thanks for saying so, I'm always happy to hear from readers.
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You're welcome.
Now that I've actually read this chapter:
Those poor plushies...
Oh, you wanted more than just a simple comment and emoticon, didn't you?
This seems like a fairly interesting start. I'll be sure to keep my eye on this story. The idea with the "blank slate" comes across as somewhat depressing to me, for some reason...
Also, I think I noticed a couple of minor errors:
I'm fairly certain you meant for that period to be a comma, mainly because of Discord's response.
Opening quotation mark is missing...
5148556 Thank you again. The first mistake I think is a holdover from when I tried to make it not a big run on sentence then I decided to make a joke of it. The second one is obviously a typo.
Also the Blank slate thing is supposed to end up being quite depressing and it's something I might explore in a sad fic in the future.
Fear not, the plushies will be avenged. Or repaired with love.. and magic.
Past sins is gonna HATE you...
5149315 Why? Is it because I essentially made evil Nyx?
5149360 pretty much, yeah.
5149372 Well fortunately I can deal with a book hating me, now if it were Pen Stroke, who wrote Past Sins, then I might be a little sad. Then again getting that level of being recognized by one of the more well known writers on this site would be really neat.
I'm not one to judge, I just like to read and with a sample pool the size of this community there are bound to be similarities... That being said we're at season 8 so where's the continuation?
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I don't know. I had high hopes for working on this one, but life kicked me in the junk and other stuff came up. I hate to disappoint anyone, but I don't know when I'm going to get back to this one.
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Well if you ever do I'll gladly help in any way shape or form.
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Thanks.