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You wake up on a deserted island with no idea who you are, where you came from or who the beautiful mare who apparently saved your life is. The only things you do know are the blatantly obvious. You're an earth pony, you have limited supplies, and you are so totally bucked.

~Author's Note~
Ello all. I just wanted to say that this is the first fan fic I've ever written with the intent of posting it, so criticism is highly welcomed. Even if you want to completely bash me for being an, "Unimaginative idiot who couldn't write his way out of a paper bag." (Legit quote from a friend who looked at one of my first stories years ago.)

Anyway I hope you enjoy this story and that no else has had a similar idea to this one.

Cover image drawn by takeru-san over at deviantART http://takeru-san.deviantart.com/

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 37 )

I agree with Deck. I really wanna see more of this fic. Rated up and faved.

:yay: More! :moustache: I'm really interested in learning why she's saying that.

I agree once again with deck. I wanna know the whole story that led up to this.

Could... could it be...? :raritydespair:

dun, Dun, DUNNN.

It feels like this is a common cliche with Ditzy fics, Give her cancer. I do hope it works out for the best, because who doesn't love Derpy...well except that one bitch that complained that she was offensive.

Overall it's a good fic. It's well written, the pacing is good and it is a good example of this kind of story.

Peace Out.


First off, glad you enjoyed the story.

Second, I honestly had no idea that this was a "common cliche", as you put it. I'm a little disappointed to find out my story isn't as unique as I thought, but if people still enjoy it then I guess it's okay.

I feel bad for bursting your bubble. It's not necessarily a common cliche but I know of several other fics and one of which also had memory loss. To apologize for this action here's a gif.



Don't feel too bad about it, I'm already over it. And thanks for the awesome gif.

At first, I was like :raritycry: but then I was like :rainbowkiss:

506300 I concur with this analysis.



Glad to see both of you liked it. It makes me fell all :pinkiehappy: inside.

506351 Do you intend to do more writing, because this is quite well done.

506305 i do believe i do as well:moustache:

That was sneaky, I approve.


I plan on doing multiple stories, especially if people found this one enjoyable.

507066 Well, if that's the case, than consider me a fan of your work.


Good to know that I finally have an official fan

507390 Good work should be rewarded with fans. On that note, though, I suggest you take a look at my works. I have quite a few, and I'd be honored if you could take a look at them.


I already planned on reading them :twilightsmile:
I'm really interested in the Rising Sun, although 32 chapters is quite a lot to read.

507531 Oh, it's not that bad. Trust me, I've read my own story in one sitting multiple times.

I enjoyed this. I was just about to tear up when you reveled that the main character's mother had died, instead of ditzy. you've earned another fan.

The length isn't the problem, it's finding time to read all of it. I'll manage somehow though :twilightsheepish:

Glad to hear it :ajsmug:

i love how you paired me up with Ditzy...it really tickles me (you see where I'm headed at) :derpytongue2:

I hope to see more fics like this where you literally put us into the story ...!

Aaaahhhhhhhhhhh, you teasing bastard!

Excellent story.


you had me going! :raritydespair:

This is by far my favorite Ditzy fic! Perfect flow with nothing distracting. I loved every word of this!:derpytongue2:

As corny as it sounds, this got me out of a bad mood that I really needed help with. Thanks!

:flutterrage:You tricked me!
...Nah, you know what, it's more than all right, actually.

That was an awesome Ditzy fan fiction nice job i cannot wait to read more FF's from you:rainbowdetermined2:

Also I hope that you do another fanfic like this:rainbowdetermined2:

Long story short. Rushed.

Short story long. You should have tried to follow style of your first chapter. Later attempts to "liven" the story made it hard to read and relate.

Overall quite good. Not my cup of tea, could use editing and critical pre-reading, but it's pretty good nonetheless.

Bravo, Bravo.. You win this round. Great fic, look forward to reading more.

you tricky.... :twilightangry2: you really had me going there. great story

Ditzy/Derpy is best pony!!:derpytongue2::heart:

:pinkiegasp:Omg!!! I thought she died!!!! I was so confused when "I" was talking about "my" mother at the funeral. I thought it was for ditzy.:derpyderp1:

So going in my favorites.

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