• Member Since 22nd May, 2012
  • offline last seen Oct 8th, 2018



She is the most beautiful mare in Ponyville. You've known her since foalhood, and you've always liked her. Though as a shy and awkward pony, you never had a chance. She's reserved for only the elite stallions in town... you are just the Quills and Sofas delivery pony... until a freak accident forces you closer to her than you ever imagined possible.

(2nd person fic featuring you and Rarity)

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 18 )

I do enjoy me some Rarity shipping, and I can relate depressingly well to the OC. Let's see how this goes.

I am tracking to see your interpretation of a romace involving Rarity.
800470 I concur!

Yep. Totally following this.

Good job.

Parity fits so well for the protagonist.
Also, way to include one of the most hilarious parts of the show. Gratz man. Followed.

This is really good! Please continue. :pinkiehappy:

Following for sure. Great work so far!

There seems to be a lot of second person fics since Scorched came out. Not that I am complaining of course. Time to read !

Oh I like it. I shall be following this.

It appears I have me a stalker.
Really, it's either that or I'm unbelievably cliche in trying to find excuses to talk to attractive people, then blowing it and fleeing. I refuse to be thought of as cliche, therefore this author must be a stalker.

801873 Iol I know the prologue is pretty cliche, it's meant to be. The rest of the story won't be though, I promise. :twilightsmile:

maaaaaan, that's AWESOME!:yay:
Can't wait for next chapter, soooo: thechive.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/girls-with-cleavage-28.jpg

It's still a wonderful story, and I demand more...
Just stop stalking me, 'kay? :raritywink:

805069 Your use of kay reminds me of Star Ocean: The Last Hope. Pretty crappy game. But I still nostalgia'd.


Bravo, my good man. I found this to be quite intriguing. I can TOTALLY relate to this. Anyway, this is really good, and I hope I see an update soon.

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