• Member Since 22nd May, 2012
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A pony from Twilight's past returns. Nopony should ever be forgotten.

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No comment ?! WTB!?
Well, I did not read it yet ^^ but I certainly will ! And then you gonna get a better comment :)

655720 actually it had like 20 comments, and a ton more views, but I accidentally deleted the third chapter when I was trying to do something else :twilightoops: woops stupid me :twilightsheepish:

>>Jenova2 Well, in that case, let me repeat myself: This story has way too few views; let's try to get it featured!

656482 ha ha yeah I hope so, at least the thumbs up stayed! :eeyup::twilightsmile:

Brilliant story, well executed, had a certain melanchony/sorrowful tone that fit the whole story. Enjoyable tale anyways, I look forward to reading other stories by you in future. Harmony Harmony and Forgotten are both really good stories that should, no pun intended be forgotten any time soon :raritywink:

I found this story to be quite well-written. I especially think that the concept of "living on through memories" was an excellent idea to work with. It was very touching emotionally, and this definitely deserved to hit the feature box. :pinkiesad2:

Many manly tears were shed. :fluttercry:

3.2.1.:fluttercry::pinkiegasp::rainbowhuh::raritycry::fluttershysad: This site needs more cry faces.

You're here? Goodie, i can now fave this fic

.... This is utterly amazing. Really. Instant like, instant fav.

This is..... So touching. And terribly sad. It breaks my heart when I read this. This is an excellent piece of Art. Congratulations on creating it. :fluttercry:

YAY! 3 hours later and still featured! 2nd longest featured time of a fic i have seen! 1st is sunny skies all day long.:derpytongue2:

Jenova? NO! NOT THE FOLLOWERS OF JENOVA!:raritydespair:

"The book of Jenova states that..." It's stuck in my head.:facehoof:

Star Catcher? As in, "The Party Hasn't Ended" Star Catcher?


Oh shit. I forgot to RSVP for my cousin's wedding!:raritycry:

God is it bad to watchmlp and be on here at the sametime:rainbowlaugh:

658363 Is this directed at me? lol. Thanks for the review, I'm sorry you didn't enjoy the first couple chapters, but I'm glad you enjoyed the ending, which was of course intended to be the best part of the story :twilightsmile:

Somehow I'm 3 for 3 in getting my stories featured, i've heard apparently that's really awesome. Thanks a ton to all my readers for making that happen! :pinkiehappy:

i too feel a empty void that i need to fill but what is it i must do to do so?

do what she will do?

or find my own path.......

a good story that touch my heart for like her, i'm broken, disgraced, alone......

REALLY good fic, well written and everything, I salute you sir/ma'am.

Twilight and the other mane 5 should realize that not everything can be solved via words or apologies... and that every action has a consequence to it

a true master piece i write this while i cry for twilight, for moondancer.... and for me..........

well shit im all depressed n stuff now

i feel like the last chapter is the most depressing listening to moondancers letters and stories but thats an idea to ponder a soul severed from a specific emotion trying to find the rest of itself. mmmm yes yes very interesting - heimerdinger :moustache:

I'm so glad that I'm alone at work right now, the last bit made a few tears escape and run down my cheeks. :fluttercry:
That was truly beautiful, a deep and meaningful story. And while the ending was sad, it was still filled with something that soothed the sadness.
I really can't wait to see what else you'll produce in the future - I'll be waiting and watching :twilightsmile: Not like a stalker though, that'd be a teeny tiny bit freaky :twilightsheepish:

You sir, deserve a slow clap.... Unfortunately I don't have an animation for that so you just have to settle for the the sound affects. ~Clap~...................................... ~Clap~........................................................~Clap~...........................................................~Clap~


Wonderful, dude. Just wonderful. The combat scene was great, and the emotion caused from it was brilliantly executed. Well done... :fluttercry:

660148 i believe something like this will suit you assets0.ordienetworks.com/images/GifGuide/clapping/dwight.gif
but anyways nicely done story

655871 :moustache: How do you delete a chapter by accident?
there's like a backup page to prevent that and everything.:heart:

Also faved.

The story isn't over, is it? It had better not be over. Or else I will :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:!!!

660311 i dunno man i feel like i got s decently satisfying ending many feels were made in reading this but i also feel like it would go down in quality if continued but hey the author might surprise us

657746 Oh, how I know of and love them.

Once again... I am almost in tears. You deserve this like.

Stories like these...I love them so much. Even though after each read I feel empty inside, I always love when I find another story such as this. You are an amazing writer and I hope you continue your great work. Similar to what Celestia said to Twilight at the end, this story will likely be forgotten in my head, but the meaning of it and how it touched me will never be forgotten deep down.

This reminds me of the story 'Forever Faithful'. :fluttercry:That story was a complete Mind F$#@. :raritydespair:

The ending reminds me of Amazing Grace when played on the bagpipes. Or maybe its because i've been listening to too much bagpipe music. IDK

Can I request a sequel? I want to see what happens to MoonDancer's.... Wait a minute......

Evil being of darkness that steals hearts = Heartless
Being whose heart was stolen but has a strong will = Nobody

MoonDancer was a Nobody and then gained her heart back! It all makes sense now!

But seriously, though. Sequel. Pronto.

This was simply amazing. It has been too long since a story of any kind tugged at my heartstrings like this one did. You have an amazing talent, one that has me itching to challenge the limits of my own. Keep doing your thing, I'm eager for more.

The barn thing: :rainbowlaugh:.
Rest of the story: :pinkiegasp: then :rainbowhuh: and then :pinkiegasp::rainbowhuh: and finally :pinkiesad2::fluttercry::applecry::raritycry:.

I rememeber this! Great story!

As an introverted, anti-social college student... ow. that hurt.

That report, while cheesy, hit me pretty hard.


Easy there! I was right there with you. The more you focus on the bad, the worse it gets. Sit down and write out everything you CAN do right now. Even if it's something small and insignificant like washing the dishes or doing some other menial task. Keep yourself busy and focus on only the good things you can do while putting your best into it. If you can't find something good to do for yourself, find something to do for others. Volunteer for charity or join one of those many "boys and girls" clubs or something else like that. And when someone reaches out in friendship, keep calm but take the offer. Don't be afraid to show yourself and what you like. Heck, even the chance that you'll meet a fellow brony is increasing every day. Don't focus on how you feel, just focus on what is right and what is kind. People, even if not everyone, will feel subconsciously indebted to you if you just do a kind thing and never once ask for compensation so if you see someone working on something, just ask if they "would like" help and eventually you'll get a reputation as a good person. Frankly, at the start you may have to force yourself into an emotionless shell for a while and just keep busy puting everything you got into your work like you don't have anything else in the world, but when you let yourself come back, you'll find that it was so hard to keep fighting and actively doing what ever you could but now you're in a better place in life and all you need to do is srug of the bad because you can't help it now and focus on the next good thing you can do. Believe me, it works even if it feels harder than hell! Just never let up until you look back and see how far you've come.

Ok therapy rant aside, this is pretty deep yet so simple and small. Sometimes you just need to go out and do the hard things to get yourself in a better place. (I'm pretty sure I just said that in my rant... :rainbowlaugh:) Eh, well it's true!:twilightsmile: k next chapter! go!

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