Getting a hang of something fun to do
It was another day in Trot Run, Redbeat waking up and getting his morning cup of coffee. Went to his computer for the latest news, and keeping in mind to move his tail before he sat down. Then heads off to his sister’s shop to assist in daily affairs.
However, Redbeat knowing his sister, Sir Floogle Horn. That any day in the Mustache Shop is going to be anything but ordinary.
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This really good. i was likeing it before, but now I really liek it now
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Troll harder
No.
What?
Sister... Sir?
Mustache Shop?
Incomplete Sentences?
Pony Creator Cover Art?
So, uh, is this your barely concealed rant on criticism? Yeah, go back to unicorn school. This still needs a metric ton of work.
What was the plot here again? Some guy we don't care about fights with some other pony (sir sister whaaat?) about first criticism and then their mother dying and then god knows what else. This is just a poorly constructed mess.
Sir is a title for men, not women. Ser is what you want, it's gender-neutral.
Seem to have read something like this before. While I can't seem to remember what was wrong with the other one this doesn't feel like much of an improvement.
5050534 You have to talk to my sister about that one lol
5051034 I don't really know either, the last manager of this account kinda fucked up from what I hear.
5050534 Also, "Ser" refers to the title of a knight in the Game of Thrones series.
This story is like a B-movie.
It's not very good, it's not very well-written.
But for some reason I find it more entertaining than some actually good stories.
Uh, good job, I suppose?
5051309
Ser is a gender neutral term for knights. It's in more things than just an overrated fantasy novel series.
5051324 I'm still practicing my writing skills, and this one was supposed to be "not good". thanks for the comment
5051341 I can roll with that, but that's how my sister wanted it spelled. I can only follow her wishes, even though it's kinda confusing why though.