Sunny Dayz is in a very weird place. Where machines grind all day, where the screams of children bounce off the walls, and where one pony, anxious to find the truth, goes beyond the realm of pain and sorrow. Mares and Gentlecolts, we present...Prisoner Infinite.
@OP: No
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I concur
it's alright, but you need an editor.
Might want to spell check your short description there...what in the wide wide world of Equestria is a "blashing of metal"?
Really, there isn't anything to say about it aside from that it wasn't scary.
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5018854 what happened to all the good grimdarks like 120 days and stuff? just saying...