• Member Since 13th Sep, 2014
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MushroomTops


True story.

Comments ( 30 )

5017408 Perhaps you should finish reading it. I think that will answer your question.

5017428 It's a ship, and I decided to use it.

Not a ship I usually get behind, but I liked it. Nice job :pinkiehappy:

that escalation was so quick it was unrealistic! :rainbowlaugh: its still alright though!

5017481 If you are reading this story or are on this site there is a 100% chance that reader knows what the character looks like.:rainbowlaugh: duh. Cut him some slack it's his first try so don't be so fussy and nit-picky.

Comment posted by MushroomTops deleted Sep 18th, 2014

5017481

And why doesn't Gilda just go and find a member of her own species, anyway?

Read the whole story next time, bud. :rainbowkiss:

“Why didn’t you just mate with another Griffon?”

This question took Gilda by surprise. She sighed before answering. “I wanted to.. I wanted to mate with somepony I love.”

5018104 Oh. Guess you're one of those people..

Ya know, most critics actually read the story before they start judging. :pinkiegasp:

But you know, the world revolves around your rules. So, yeah, you keep on what you're doing. :trixieshiftright:

I can tell you're a successful person..

5018126 I don't think I'm going to clog my comment section up with you. Sorry if you want the attention, but I'm not going to give it to you. Goodbye to you! Have fun!

Remember, trolling is illegal on some planets. :rainbowkiss:

I read this to my brony and non-brony friend over XboX Live and they enjoyed it.

Not too bad, its rushed but then again I came for some clop, not a novel and some clop is what I got :twilightsmile:

5019424 Thanks for the review! :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

i like gilda Pairings. but sad to say the pacing was really bad. terrible even. i felt no build up, gilda was way WAY to needy sounding and weak sounding, nothing here felt right. Rainbow maybe loyal but she's no sucker. She'd never go along with gilda so quick. also Only One of gilda's wings were damaged dash could have stay'd on the damaged side and assist her up to her place and not carry her. to many flaws to give this a passing review this gets a 3/10, it has potential, but overall all the "kind words" gilda said feels like a sympathy card trick to get dash in bed.

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I had to tell them to shut up multiple times. Even threatened a DDoS, but that was a joke.

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