I actually prefer this ending.

Dash is a bit of a pedo, goin after the 14 year old

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You don't know how hard I am laughing XD

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Too bad it isn't the actual ending :P

3481541 Alternate ending 1 part 2: Rainbow has a comfy cell

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Brilliant, I will start writing ASAP

3482859 Dude, I would laugh so hard if you actually do that

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Maybe I will just do it if I have nothing else to do

Where is this ending of extra penetration i was told about.... Don't make me break out my reinforcements...

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I love this ending. I must confess, the romance caught me completely by surprise, I thought Twilight was just too analytical in her comments previously. I love this ending and very much prefer it. I love the story overall and will Favorited it.

This is one of the few coolest stories I've ever read and the longest, good job. I am waiting for more similar ...👍👌

There has to be a second story, Heck ill help ya edit it if there is