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Ray: Ffffuck...
this just got real.
and first
525598 In chapter 2. Where he broke his arm after
1) Not bracing himself for the fall.
2) Not rolling properly.
woohoo
See this is what i'm talking about, Nice work man *Brohoof*
still loving it
you make it soud as if the story is third-person. you should use 'i' more instead of 'ray'.
story is great moar please
FUCKING CLIFF HANGERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Lame excuse time! (lol) He was messed up from the impact of the branch? ... Your not falling for it are you ... Well atleast I made a lame excuse
Well I'm glad people are ok with chapter ten, I wasn't sure if people would like wut happend Also cliffhangers are revenge for all those cliffhangers I have been put through XD
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Spartans never kidnapped Children, they raised their own to become powerful warriors, and if my history is correct; They were not allowed to engage in battle until they could do certain tasks, and those tasks came at the a later age, like 17-19, rough estimates from historians.
And Halo? Really? Halo? By that logic, the Earth will also be attacked by aliens with Hasbro weapons.
I'm telling you; a young teen could not do SEAL/Delta/ParaRescue. There is a reason age is thrown onto signs ups.
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The way you said it previously implied that teens can't do these things at all. 100% impossible. While unlikely, yes, there are possibilities.
Yes, Halo. Because Halo is the best gaming series. I don't see what Hasbro weapons has to do with anything. Only showing that the same idea applies.
You do know there have been teenagers in the military before in major wars like WWII and Vietnam, right? Albeit not Special Forces, there have been infantry as young as 14/15 before. I see no reason why one can't become Spec Ops. The possibilities!
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I know there were teens in WWII, my Great Grand Father was one of them, lol.
Main Forces, I don't doubt it.
Just, trust me on this: I can confirm, 100% that a teen (14-16) COULD NOT complete SEAL training, and given what I've been told about Delta and others, Special Forces would be out of their reach. I mean, why would they in the first place when they have something that is working well beyond what is needed? That just seems like a step backwards to me.
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100%? That's pretty damn sure. I think though...-
God damn it, it's 11:30. I need bed so I can think straight and not seem like a complete nob who has no idea what he's talking about. Excuse my idiocy. I'll just go stand in the corner.
Read some Halo books to get a better understanding of what I was talking about. They're a pretty good read and poke at the point I was attempting to make.
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U FORGOT MARSOC!!!! U silly filly
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It's all good man, I read Fall of Reach, I know what you meant, haha.
Understand that I'm not raging or anything; Just letting people know. I also oversaw this problem to enjoy the story, and if you can get past that fact, it's a pretty good read. But why am I telling you this? xD
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I read The Fall of Reach too, and thanks, i understandthat ur not raging, and thanks for enjoying
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Oh, of course. I keep trying to imagine "Ray" as a thirty year old rather than a fourteen year old (I believe that's what it was). It IS somewhat hard to imagine him so young, so I just think HALO LOGIC or thirty year old. The latter works better.
I never said you were raging. Who says two people can't have a reasonable debate? You tell me this because you have a secret crush on me.
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Nah bro, I was naming Special Forces in specific, if I wanted to name them in the open I might have well said "JSOC", or SOCOM.
I know that Scout Snipers and Force Recon fall under MARSOC, and MARSOC technically is a branch of SOCOM. Lol
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If i just got learned why does that have bad grammer?
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Oh damn, you got me.
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Your picture has failed to show up. Don't worry, we can have all the babies you want.
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Point of the joke, lol
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Welp, I should get to that fancy bed of mine if I ever want to actually edit this story during my study hall period (). Good night to thee!
531956
Expect a fancy chapter ten with added details and more logic! LOGIC IS FUN!
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531991
Welp, now I'm going to have nightmares. God damn it.
531997
Good, wouldn't want you to sleep too soundly, lol.
531991
WTF? BLACK OPS 2? FUTURE WARFARE WTF? IS THIS
Y IDK WTF AAAGGGGHHHH FFFAAAAA
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x3tedlWs1XY
532011
The trailer looks legit, but basing off any CoD game ever; it's not going to be good, except 4, god I miss 4.
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Yea so they are either trolling or they are desperate to compete with halo
Ray, prepare to be trolled by
Seriously, he's so going to get it.
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This is going to be the worst Call of Duty by far.
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MFW watching the trailer: weknowmemes.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/02/not-sure-if-gusta-face.png
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I will not be buying this on release day.
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MFW?
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MFW = My face when...
Hmmm..I'm reading....and I'm impressed. Just...Try to draw thing out a tad bit more in future chapters, like you did with the hostage scene. It works well.
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Yea i know, I got that comment a little bit before so I tried it with that scene and I ended with a nicely sized chapter the next chapter is around 2k words atm so I hope im doing a good job.
531991
You shouldn't have done that...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cuspTAbt-Y4&feature=channel&list=UL
Well written. Emotionally impacting. I enjoyed it.