These last moments

by BewhoUr

Time to say goodbye

-------------------------------------- Rainbow Dash

"Who will be going first?" What a question. What a mortally absurd question. Who cared who went first, just so long as we all got to spend a moment with Twilight? This was such a bad situation for all of us. I didn't think that any of us wanted to say goodbye... admit that Twilight was dying. So I raised a shaking but strong hoof. I would do this for the team. I would take the pain of going first. The doctor nodded and opened the steel door to let me in to Twilight's hospital room. I flew in, taking a deep breath as the door clicked shut behind me. My eyes were drawn to a bed in the middle of the room, where an unconscious Twilight lay. The beeping of the heart monitor rang in my ears as I made my way to the bedside. I opened my mouth and began to speak.

"Gee Twi. Where do I start? Its been a real good run. I want to thank you. Before I met you, I didn't know what friendship could do to me. How it would change and effect me. In the play of my life, you've played a pretty big role. I was just an arrogant, stubborn, mare. And though I didn't realize it at the time, I was unhappy. When I met you, you opened me up to so much. To joy, responsibility, to true passion, to so much more. And I really will never be able to thank you enough Twilight. You really are my best friend, and though I never thought I would admit it... you're awesome. Much more so then me. I know I can't bring you back Twilight, though if I could, I would in a heartbeat. If I could give my life to you, I would. But.. I can't. I hope you know that I love you Twilight. Stay cool kid." And with that, I squeezed Twilight's half lifeless hoof one last time and walked out of the room, tears of anger, regret, and sadness dripping down my cheeks.

-------------------------------- Applejack

"Why shucks, I suppose I'll go next then." I gave Rainbow a quick hug, then slowly walked in to the room, my feet dragging as if they were made of stone. The second I saw Twilight, I ran over to her and nuzzled her cheek, tears spilling down my face. "Twilight! Why'd ya have to go and do this? I know its not your fault, but... Twi,, I need to confess something. Before you go. You were the first friend ah ever had Twilight. You gave me something that I could never replace: A feeling of being loved by someone other then family. Aww shucks Twilight. Ye know what? You are my family. You've been there for me. You trusted me and I trusted you. We were as much family as family can get. I love you Twilight. I'll miss you as long as my hooves rest on earth." I took my muzzle away from her cheek and walked out of the room sullenly, like a statue with a crack in it.

-------------------------------- Pinkie pie

I saw how sad Applejack looked as she walked outside. She looked terrible! Part of me didn't want to go in, ever. But the other part of me tugged me towards the hospital bedroom. So I wordlessly bounced into the dreary room, throwing some confetti into the air and smiling halfheartedly. The second I saw Twilight's state my hair went flat. My eyes watered as I placed a hoof on her chest.

"Oh Twilight, you silly pony. Why did you have to get hurt? If you had never gotten hurt, you would still be here, and if you were still here, we wouldn't all be so sad right now... I don't want you to leave Twilight. Please stay..... I know that you can't. But I still hope that you know I will party twice as hard for you! I will never ever EVER forget you Twilight... I love you." I bounced out of the room, sobbing.

---------------------------------- Rarity

I tossed my head into the air and, sniffing a bit, walked into the room as Pinkie bounced out. It was my time to say goodbye. Make my five minutes count. I sat by Twilight's side and placed my head on the edge of her bed, sighing.

"Can you hear me Twilight? I hope you can. Somehow I know you can. You've always heard. I love you so very much Twilight. You are such an inspiration! You would always keep going, going, going no matter what. You have shown me what it is to have a true friend Twilight. I hope you find peace up there... I miss you already. You're absolutely fabulous my darling." And with that, I placed a silver rose in her hair gently and exited the room with grace.

-------------------------------- Fluttershy

I nodded nervously as Rarity walked out. I didn't want to go in, but I had to be brave. This was my last chance to say goodbye. I walked in quietly with a lowered head and gently walked up to Twilight's bed.

"Oh dear Twilight... I wish I could have been there when the attack hit. I mean, I wouldn't have been brave enough to do anything, but at least I could have warned you to duck... Twilight, I don't know what I'll do without you.... I love you so much Twilight. Thank you for everything." I pricked my ears as the rest of my friends walked in, with Spike sitting on Applejack's back. I comfortingly scooped Spike up in my hooves, seeing that the little guy was crying. Spike sat upright and looked at Twilight.

"Twilight! Please don't do this... I love you Twilight! I need you! Please don't go..." Spike said, choking. I lowered spike to Twilight's side and he placed a claw on her hoof before letting go and hugging me with a sob. But then, we heard a voice.

"Thank you..." Twilight murmured, a smile on her face. Then the heart monitor went blank.

Author's Note:

Sorry if this is rushed, I wrote it in 20 minutes. Anyhow, hope you liked it!

Comments

[goaway]

[Starlight Nova]

This sounds like it needs a sad tag...

[BewhoUr]

4987819
Rarity feels your tears Thanks for reading

4987831
Thanks for pointing that out fixed it :)

[RainbowShine]

I told myself I wouldn't cry... But I cried anyways

[BewhoUr]

4988749

I cried when I was writing it... so we're even
Thanks for reading!

[MetalHead777]

so much for not crying :'(

[lunabrony]

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[BewhoUr]

4988864

Thanks for reading!

4988929
You are very welcome.

[Twilight Shine]

4988985 the feels

[BewhoUr]

4989685
I aim to shoot the feels right in the heart
Thanks for reading! It means a lot

[Destiny choice2345]

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[BewhoUr]

4990759
She was a good mare.
Thanks for reading!

[darkflame1337]

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[jazzie366 FLUFFKIN]

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I know how you feel, so i extended what you said, because i felt it even worse. Amazing story though, 20 minutes of writing, just like me. Awesome as usual.

[BewhoUr]

5080856
Thank you sir.
ITS SO SAD!!!
Rarityz? Whats going on?
I READ A TRAGEDY FIC!
Ugh. Come on Rarity, your therapist told you not to read those...
THE VOICES TOLD ME TO!
Crap...

[jazzie366 FLUFFKIN]

>>BewhoUr
ALRIGHT RARITY STOP RESISTING!
NO! I DO NOT WANT TO GO!
AH! C'MON SUGAR CUBE! YOU NEED TO TALK IT OUT WITH HIM!
NO! I WANT TO KEEP EATING ICE CREAM
Can you just please come out and talk to the psychiatrist?
Sure!
Are you kidding...
I'm done, she's your problem.

[BewhoUr]

5081327
*at the therapists house*
I don't know whats gotten into me! I"M SO EMOTIONAL....
Well. First of all you need to eat more ice cream. And read more sad fanfictions.
REALLY!?
Really.
Trixe? DO u know what ur doing? Are you even a therapist?
I DONT CARE I NEED HELP.... I'M GOING TO BUY MORE ICE CREAM! WHATEVER TRIXIE SAYS MUST BE CORRECT, IT JUST HAS TO BE!
Rarity, you are not putting all that ice cream on my credit card.

[jazzie366 FLUFFKIN]

>>BewhoUr
RARITY! GIVE ME MY CREDIT CARD OR ELSE!
MUST.... NOT.... THINK.... ABOUT.... MUSTARD.
Dabuq u mean mustard...?
MUSTARD....
What the buck?
I NEED MUSTARD FLAVORED ICE CREAM!!!!
Eww...
What about gem flavored ice cream?
Bingo.
I swear to god if this goes on my credit card.... i will take your pay from Photo Finish to pay for the ice cream
I make enough to pay you as it is, so... Yeah.
Point taken. *squee*

[BewhoUr]

5083390
*rarity walks out of store with a truckfull of icecream in various disgusting flavors*
RARITY...? HOW MUCH DID THOSE COST?
Your entire bank account darling!
RARITY, I SWEAR TO GOD THAT I WILL DESTROY YOU.
No! I'll protect you Rarity!!
ILL BE FINE SPIKE! PROTECT THE ICE CREAM!
*Twilight lunges as the ice cream truck and slams her horn into it, icecream starts exploding out of the truck*
SPIKEY WIKEY! FIXXXX ITTTT!
*Spike jams his nose into the hole*

[NebulaNyx]

5083699 5083390
What the hell is going on here?

[BewhoUr]

5191159
this is just something we do from time to time...
it usually involves mustard and/or chainsaws...

its like a story in the comments, but its really crazy sometimes.

[jazzie366 FLUFFKIN]

5191159 No, what is going on HERE. [youtube=https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=q1No3DP0p3s]

[jazzie366 FLUFFKIN]

Also, WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON HERE!??! (Age warning: 10+ years old, don't eat before watching, you will throw up) [youtube=https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=3Mog4m0mVSA]