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I am an freelance artist and writer. I love MLP:FIM and enjoy reading some of the stories other Bronies write.


After finding hints to an ancient, library, Twilight leaves home to attempt to discover what Star Swirl couldn't... the legendary 'Vault of Origins'. This lost library is supposed to hold the histories of the Pre-Windigo Exodus civilizations and perhaps the origins of Ponykind themselves... but will she be able to survive the dangers that guard the Vault?

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This looks promising...

From what I can deduce, I imagine Twilight will get quite the shock from learning that Celestia and Luna were opposed to each other in such ways, while the Doctor will probably be just as surprised to learn that Celly and Woona now cooperate. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png

its a good Well written story. :moustache::twilightsmile::moustache:

but its not my thing:pinkiesad2:

good job :pinkiehappy:

737656 We already know that they fought once, but now we can learn the 'details' on it... and we know how much Twilight likes details. As for the Doctor... who knows how he will react at learning the two rulers are friends again. :trixieshiftright:

737678 Thank you for the compliment, and sorry that it isn't your thing. Then again, not everyone likes the same things. :pinkiehappy:

hmmm, interesiting, lets see where this goes:twilightsmile:

I don't like it... I loves it! You must write moar
I dunno bout you but I trust the doctor completely and as for who's side I'm on, I support the "Night Mare"

Nice concept, but please consider running spell check. Even the name of the first chapter itself is misspelled. :facehoof: Just for the sake of canonicity, you should know that Star Swirl lived either during or before the exodus to Equestria, so that would not have been in his past. Remember that he was the mentor of "Clover the Clever," from the Hearth's Warming Eve play.

738207 Glad to have ya aboard! Hope you enjoy the ride!

738424 All heil the Lunar Republic!

738556 Thanks for correcting me with this history. I rewatched the Hearths Warming episode and missed the mention of Star Swirl being Clover the Clever's mentor. Complete goof on me, I am rewriting it now. And the title on the first chapter is also a big goof on me... I kinda changed that at the last minute. :twilightblush:

Thanks for the input!


Great! I'll look forward to reading more of this! Good luck! :raritywink:


You should continue with this. Don't let a good idea like this die on vine.

Sorry for the late update. Life came and hit me like a train, I got back on track only to discover that I forgot half of the story, so I had to rewrite half of it again. But it as back and I will try and update it as I finish each of the chapters! :pinkiehappy:

I'm glad to finally see this story get it's next chapter. 1064258 hang in there, I had lost part of my own story due to computer crash so I know the pain. Hope to see more soon :yay:

I like how you write down Twilight's inner thoughts. Specifically the last paragraphs of chapter two.

This may turn into a very interesting story. I shall put it on my reading list.

So is the vault of origins going to be in this story or not?:rainbowhuh:

1214396 You will see the Vault of Origins, just not right away! :pinkiehappy:

1214813 will the vault involve war never changing?



6781022 To be honest, I've just lost interest in writing fics here. I'd actually love to continue this one, but I just have the patience or time nowadays. Sorry. :fluttershysad:

6789040 Its..*sniff*:fluttercry:.. Its okay:pinkiesad2:

Well thank you for responding :twilightsmile:

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