Oh boy, what a jam I'm in. You know, it's strange to think that I was in the Colorado a couple days ago. Now? Where am I you may ask? Well friend, I'm either on another planet, or in another dimension. One of the two. Either way, it doesn't matter. I don't care anymore. This "Equestria" place is pretty much a total wreck. A total wasteland filled with death, pain, and war.
There are trigger happy monsters that look like people running around. There are terrifying demons flying in the skies. Worst of all, no one here trusts me, or my dog. No, I wouldn't exactly say this is a trip to Hawaii. So, I'm gonna have to find a way out myself.
How am I gonna do that? To be honest with you, I have no idea. Not a single clue. I can tell you one thing though. These odds are NOT in my favor.
(This is The Hunter redone. I hope my followers will still enjoy it.)
The credit for the artwork goes to a fella by the username of ColtZ. Any art work you need done, he's your guy.
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Good start can't wait to see what happens next
this looks good ^_^
Will there be more
5077985 Yep. Got a new chapter in the works.
well good so far, keep it up!
I can't wait for the next chapter
there needs to be wolves in it like your first attempt
5208136 I'll see what I can do!
There are going to be changes throughout the story from before. Not major changes. Same events will happen, but some new things are going to be added as well. Either way, I hope you enjoy.
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No no no.
I think you mean.
Another peaceful day has passed peacefully throughout Equestria, only to have another await them. Another day of peace. Princess Celestia was peacefully, enjoying her peaceful slumber while two guards stood peacefully outside of the room; standing peacefully at each side of the doorway. Throughout the peaceful, quiet, regal halls, guards roamed peacefully; peacefully keeping any intruders from getting inside.
(You used the word peace twice in five words and I couldn't resist the joke.)
In the interest of time, sanity, and the joke. I will not continue the joke.
5321269 Lol!
if you are going to turn him into a pony, better let me know on time so i can drop it , otherwise is going ok
i will be so pissed if he turns into a pony....other than that keep up the great work ^_^
5606789 Don't worry, I'm trying to steer away from anything overused.
5607831 thanks
5608081 No problemo
5608259 personally i dont mind the cliches sometimes is more interesting to see how the author manage em than just trying to avoid em in order to be original which is not bad but sometimes tends to end pretty bad
5608828 Yeah, well I'm glad you somewhat enjoy it so far.
at least he has his dog with him ^_^ if that dog freaking dies i will go ape shit...
i hope whoever brought him to equestria is getting a shot on the face when everything ends, i know i would help the ponies and all the jazz but when everything is said and done i would go and empty a mag on the face of whoever made me pass for all that crap
5759312 It's weird how if the human dies, nobody cares, but if the dog dies, people start losing their shit.
5759771 Sam from I Am Legend
5759771 ikr XD
good story so far.
good chapter. :)
5990843 Sorry that it took me longer than usual. The first time I finished the chapter, it seemed to be all over the place, so I had to re write a majority of it.
5991039 It is ok. Take all the time you need.
KILL ALL OF THEM
PS. good chapter
while the story is getting way better than before i cant help but hate trevor, i know he is just a teen but damn he sure is a moron when was he born the 80's or in some rural isolated zone, after all the stuff that he has been through anyone besides a trained soldier would be beyond shell shocked and why is he so freaked out now after he decided to open fire against other humans?
6134131 People react to fear in different ways. Some bottle it up like Trevor here
6134131 Plus, not a lot of people would be thinking clearly after so much. Sometimes it's best not to think, it will only make it worse
this chapter is called depression because the MC is depressed or the reader will feel depressed after reading it?, to be honest the original version made more interesting
6243487 The original version? What do you mean?
When I read this chapter I thought of a great line.
"At least it seems more human than you."
Although that would probably get me killed.
good job
that was close
6535630 Thoughts?
6539583 I liked everything but him freaking out buuuuut that's realistic so it makes since
did you mean "Es tut mir leid"
more?