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StarkyShy


Stories in 2nd person, Stories about feet, Stories about tickling, and stories about you tickling feet.

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Sounds interesting......

Hopefully this clopfic contains some of that sweet foot fetish action. :twilightblush:

>mfw after reading this clopfic

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I'd probably fix up a couple of sentences and them but otherwise, it was a nice little foot tickling story. The ZecoraBloom pairing is rather interesting. I look forward to some more foot fetish like stories in the near future. :twilightsmile:

Shelved simply for the description.

Snoop Dog himself couldn't have wrote a better one.

I'll give the story itself a read later.

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Thanks, glad you liked it. Writing for Zecora is not easy.

But it's a challenge I set myself to conquer.
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That's what reels the readers in.

Not bad. Feet and tickling aren't my thing (tbh I don't really get those fetishes but who am I to judge), but it was well written. Nice job on Zecora's rhyming as well, that must've been a challenge.

I don't normally read foot-fetish stories, but this one was oddly appealing...bravo~! :raritywink:

The rhyming story description is really great. There are a few issues with tense shifts in the writing (sentences written in present tense instead of past tense), but overall it was pretty good.

A new foot fetish story ! Yay ! It's lovely.

5799585
Believe me, it was.

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Yeah, tense consistency is one of the biggest problems of mine.

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Thank you very much!

5806951 And you still did a great job.:pinkiehappy:

This was so arousing.
The foot fetish was really awesome, Zecora's rhyms were enticing and funny and Applebloom's reactions were perfect.

Ten-outta-ten. Wish there was more stories like that.

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