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StarkyShy


Stories in 2nd person, Stories about feet, Stories about tickling, and stories about you tickling feet.

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That was pretty damn good. While the dialogue in non erotic parts needs some work, the narration is wonderful, as well as the process of tickling itself. I am looking forward to reading the next chapters!

And this was merely the chapter after the prologue. I approve.

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Well, glad you liked it so much.

Honestly, the non-smut part is the stuff I have the most trouble with. It just seems to be a hindrance, because it's so much easier to write the dirty stuff. But I can't just jump into it, but hopefully there'll be less of the pesky exposition.

7390958 Oh, it can indeed be a chore to get through the stuff you don't think about and making it mesh with whatever's on your mind.

I, myself, usually struggle with that as part of my writer's block: I only think about certain scenes - beginning, middle, and end - I find tasteful, but I rarely think about bridging them together until an indefinite period of time passes.

I believe in ya, though. If you made a decent read out of Royal Privileges, you can do the same here. :raritywink:

I look forward to more

Can't wait for more to be honest.

I. Need. MOAR.:moustache:

Please, when will you continue?

Is this being discontinued?

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Probably. But I'm not against doing a chapter for it every now and again between commissions and chapters of Fluttershy's Desires.

please do more

I really hope you do more. I know you haven't touched for a while, but do please consider it.

We need sequal to this amazing story!

So.......

When will the next chapter come out? And who’s gonna get it next?

It’s been more than 4 years. I’d like to see what’ll happen to Twilight (my favorite), Pinkie (that’ll be interesting), & Rainbow (need I say more?).

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Unfortunately, my commissioner hasn't asked me to make a continuation on it. If someone else were to commission me to do the remaining chapters, I'd be more than happy to write them.

Update soon I really want to see more of this.

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What do you charge for commissions?

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$15 for each 1000 words

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