Strange things happen when you're asleep, as Rarity and Sweetie Belle are about to find out.
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Will update inconsistently. You have been warned. After wracking my brains for an eternity trying to write a second chapter, I've decided to leave this as a stand-alone piece. My apologies to anyone expecting a follow-up.
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So I have a couple of questions. Like, uh, how is Sweetie Belle still alive? And why did she let Rarity eat her. But the most important question is: Is this incest kind of? Because if this story is described as fetish fiction, and it involves siblings, would that make it incest?
Technically, it's great, the pacing is decent, and I'd actually give this a thumbs up if not for one, small little detail
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Yes, I don't mind that you have a fetish, but please don't post it on here for everyone to see.
5388953 Don't even start to question how fetishes work. Some people might actually give you a (fantasy) explanation and it's likely you wont want to here it. If you do want to here it, f-list.net can help you (NSFW role playing sight warning). Also yes this would be incest. Also childporn, and possibly noncon.
Why do these things have to be added to groups I'm in?
I didn't want to see vore "fetish fiction". In fact, I didn't even know what vore was until arriving here. Good job author, you've ruined what little innocence TwiIight Sparkle had left. What has been seen can not be unseen.
Fetish dislike spam? Why? Liking just cause of that.
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I haven't actually read this fic yet but are you kidding me?
Do you have any idea how much fetish fiction is posted here every week, and how often fetish fiction is on the feature box every day?
I won't pretend to play innocent, I like vore, but I'm not going to down vote the trillions of clop fics that get posted here every day simply because I don't like clop.
I'm going to read this now; if it's good and the L/D ratio is purely because of it being a vore fic I am going to have my jimmies rustled hardcore.
If the ratio is justified then I'll leave it be.
Edit: I read it. It wasn't that bad, there wasn't even any sexual content, which is usually associated with vore.
What the hell, FIMfiction?
If you don't mind the pun, I find this story... *WAIT FOR IT* hard to swallow. Since it would be IMPOSSIBLE for an equine's jaw to stretch the requisite amount to devour a filly, and she wasn't chewed into little bits, Rarity must have deposited her lil sis in her tum tum another way. Either through reverse pregnancy, or... we're looking at a youngster with a nice, dyed brown coat. Either way, I find this scenario utterly repugnant in every way and you sir, are SICK. As is anyone who gets off on this stuff. Now if, you'll excuse me, I have to put on my diaper for mama is coming around later. She doesn't like it when her little darling isn't dressed for the occasion...
Vore is one of the dumber deviantART fetishes in my opinion. It's strange, I can suspend my disbelief for magical talking horses but not for them eating one another and no one is physically harmed in the act.
...Why?
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Look at the comment above yours.
I'm stunned by it.
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Because what a person gets off to automatically makes them horrible!
... No. It doesn't. You can't make a blanket statement like that just because you don't like the fetish.
5389685 It doesn't make them a horrible person automatically, but if makes them excuse horrible things, like rape and child molestation, then, really, it kind of does...
Not saying that if you enjoy a clopfic you're horrible, but if you're now desensitized to horrible acts, it's gone too far.
But that comment you're replying is actually sort of a joke, if you can't tell.
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Oh... Whoops.
5389699 If it's not a joke, then lord help us all, because that means the diaper thing is true too...
Oh look, vore fiction! And we all know how well that went over with the last author who tried it. *cough* zeldafand *unconvincing cough*
Mention the word "vore" and you get downvoted to Tartarus no matter what the story itself contains. Mention the word "futa" on the other hoof, and you get into the feature box quicker than Macintosh can plow into a mare's bum hole, again no matter what the story contains.
This particular story is definitely not responsible for its own rating. It was totally unfetishized from start to finish, kept everyone in character, and was pretty good when it comes to the quality of the writing itself. I'm a little iffy about the use of <> for telepathy rather than italics, but other than that, it was enjoyable. Heck, even if I wasn't over the moon into vore, I'd have still enjoyed this because it's a good story.
Calm the fuck down, Fimfiction. Vore has just as much of a place here as all those foalcon fics that hit the feature box every once in a while.
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You all need to CHECK OUT MY USERNAME, put two and two together, bang yourself repeatedly over the head with a sledgehammer, then come back and apologise. Or at least, stop eating people.
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Sorry; I didn't know it was a joke. My apologies, friend.
5389726 I knew it was a joke, dumb-bum.
Why do people hate this?
5389736 No idea. No idea at all. Apparently there's a difference between human child porn and horse child porn. At first glance that's maybe gonna come across as an obvious difference, but considering how humanised these ponies already are...
I really do worry about this place sometimes.
5389737 Oh, really? Well according to comment No 14, you were somewhat wavering over the whole adult sized toddler fantasy. So don't make out you're smarter than the rest... stupid bottom. (BTW, you REALLY need to work on your insults)
5389765 Holy crap, you're actually really daft. I wasn't talking about you at all, that's why I said CLOPFICS. Was your comment a CLOPFIC? I don't think so. Your diaper comment actually gave me a laugh.
K whatever bye.
5389749 Because they're normal, rational human beings who are more interested in chowing down on Santa Claus's candy canes, than good ol' Saint Nick himself?
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Children are children whether they're humans or horses or something in between, like ponies. That's my main problem with it: Sure, they have a different body type, but foals are exactly like human children, mentally. Foalcon is exactly the same as any other kind of pedophilia. Which is worse: Rarity eating Sweetie Belle in her sleep and getting her out virtually unscathed in the morning, or Rarity pinning her to the bed and using her in her sleep and... No, I'm trying to think of a way Sweetie can come out of it virtually unscathed, but there's no fixing that.
/rant
Sorry, Bleughie... If you want me to remove this, just ask. That way you're not left with a deleted comment to mar your reputation. Speaking of your reputation, you're handling this very well. /) I think I like you.
5389736 Because underaged people having sex happens, while people being swallowed whole for sexual pleasure and having no side-effects would never happen in real life, and is, therefore, even more off-limits than other things. My guess.
Depending on what country you are, or what time period you lived in, age of consent changes. Eating people has always been a no-no.
5389770 That's it... retreat when you know you're in the wrong. The only person who mentions diapers here was me... and my remark wasn't a 'clopfic'. Whether you laughed or not is irrelevant... You were referencing my comment, so if you want to see someone daft I suggest you take a good, hard look in the mirror. There, I've said my piece Soccerboy. Cheerio!!
5389792 Dude, what? Like, seriously, what's up your butt? I was never talking about you to begin with, and then you called me out to begin with with this 5389726 comment. Obviously I'm going to answer you. If you're trying to be a troll, I guess I can say you were successful. Otherwise, I don't know what to say...
I was DEFENDING your comment by calling it a joke, and then you call me out.
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Of course it does, but there's no reason to fetishize it to the extent that Fimfiction and, say, Japanese culture do. I know how traumatic it is to be taken advantage of. It's not about the age, sure; it's about maturity, understanding, and equality.
Soft vore is impossible to translate into reality unless you're mad or desperate. On the other hoof, I know people who have pedophilic tendencies who fight temptation every day. Little teasers like foalcon can be a way for them to blow off steam, or they can be a way for them to rationalize it being okay. It's a dangerous line that's so easy to cross. I'm not against stories that involve children and sex - hell, in spite of my past I've been tempted to write one myself because it would make a fantastic story - but once it crosses that line, you'll find no support from me.
...Luna fuck me with the moon, am I a social justice warrior now?
5389808 Um... no, you're okay lol. You are nowhere even CLOSE to being a SJW. You have logic. SJW usually have no logic at all (or are extremely biased, to say the least).
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I suppose that's alright then.
Hmph. I've been here long enough that I should just read the damn story and find something relevant to say. See you on the other side!
(Spotted all the downvotes and wanted to see what the fuss was about.)
When I first arrived at FIMFic, I was unaware there was already another Estee in the fandom. My counterpart works at another site, generally on commission, and writes to the needs of the reader. Namely, you tell hir which pony you'd like to see eaten, which other pony you want to do the eating, and so it shall be written. For a fee.
I'm still waiting for hir to complain about someone mixing hir up with Piano Murdering Pony Hitler.
So haven't been there, haven't done that, but that country seems to be economically healthy. (They recycle.)
5389806 "The diaper thing must be true too", you said... Which was a reference to my comment. I'm bored talking about this, but you are in the wrong here... and thinking I'm a troll for simply trying to state my case and cutting edge remarks such as dumb-bum and daft aren't going to sway my POV either. And you were DEFENDING my comment, well, with friends like you, who need enemies? You seem to be slightly confused, which is why I suppose you're here reading a cannibalism fic when you say you find them unsettling. I'm here because I enjoy reading stories with bad ratings. What's your excuse?
5389836 That secondary comment I made was sarcasm.
"Lord help us all", as if I actually CARE what people do in their own homes...
5389838 Well, that explains it. Clearly you need some practice at the art. Perhaps you should take lessons from me.
Oh, and to the person who first of all LIKED my comment No 7, then turned it into a DISLIKE when they probably read some of my follow up remarks... HA HA HA. As if I care. Get a life.
Ciao!
Oh boy. A down-vote rush to make an author into "object less" for content that offends you. Ya, that's fair(deep sarcasm).
I am neutral on this story, it's not my thing-- now stop picking on the new guy(or gal). Use that 'energy and drive' to do something constructive. Also, crappy trolling is crappy(get a life or get better at trolling-- like pick better targets).
Bye.
5390062 Well, since you're the good guy in this scenario, I must ask, since I don't have answer. How does he improve his story?
5390097 How does he improve it? He barely even needs to. It's not exactly unreadable writing after all.
The best thing Bleughie could do is alter the description to remove calling the story "fetish fiction", and remove the vore warning since that's already implied by the blurb. He could also change the title to remove the "and I liked it" part, since that's all part of what's causing people to take one look and hit the down vote button.
5390124 Good thought. I didn't consider those. The only help I could have provided would have been "DON'T WRITE FETISH FICTION." In fact I did just that in my earlier comment. But I suppose that his title does its job, if its job is to attract people only for them to hit the downvote button.
1. Lead into the stories fetish element more slowly. Establish context first and then the 'handwave-y' explanations on the how's of the stories fetish elements. Suspension of disbelief will be much harder for this piece(though less of an issue for the target audience/author).
2.Practice makes perfect-- write more and comeback to this piece
3. Even if it is written for a teen rating don't post it as one... The Trolls and bored armchair 'crusaders of _' will descend on teen rated stories more often(teen rating+sex tags on a very fetish story... nope. bad idea).
P.S.: 5390097 nice try turning this around on me here. Great deflection. Much meh.
5390124 +1 for practical advice
5390163 Who's deflecting? I genuinely thought that this fic was unsalvageable, yet you seemed to know something that I didn't.
Also, you probably think I look like this.
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5390206 Actually, given the tone I used in my posts... That pic really fits me right then(I can be honest here, I was unnecessarily snobbish and confrontational). Calling me out for it previously was fair.
Going "white knight" here against other "white knights" isn't the brightest thing(not really you for this part). Though it's mighty satisfying to do at least once.
P.S.:Nice pic.
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Man, I kinda weep for the author, who's going to wake up and see this giant tirade of comments and an equally giant Sith lightsaber in place of this story's vote box. I hope he keeps writing this, even if the opening could have been handled a bit more carefully.
5390364 That thought about comments crossed my mind, actually. You know what, I'll do something about it.