• Published 16th Apr 2012
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They gunna sell us! - Ghost Cobbraaa



Pinkie and Rainbow Dash get captured by two mysterious slave merchants.

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They gunna sell us!

“Ask the strange man pulling cage for directions, you sead. He seems nice you, you sead”

“Oh, dashie. It’s not all that bad.”

“Pinkie, we are being sold as slaves in a strange country. HOW COULD IT GET WORSE!?!”

“Well, at least we're together” the pink pony smiled widely as the cage bumped along on the dirt and gravel road. Her smile faded into a look of hurt when dash grumbled a few words and turned away, obviously disagreeing that being together was a good thing.

The sun hung bright in the mid day brightly illuminating the yellow and orange desert sand. Miles of nothing but vast emptiness stood before the travelers as they trekked through the nothingness. The cage was being driven by a gray muscular pony with dirty black hair covering his eyes. Three ponies were behind the carriage following closely, all garbed in fluent black cloth that covered their entire bodies save the eyes.

The cage was made of thick iron, and a sign was loosely cast onto the center of the cage that read “slaves for sale: 300 bits “ A giant water dispenser like you would normally see on a hamster's cage was attached to the cage, poking its mettle arm into the enclosure to allow the ponies to drink from the degrading contraption. The floor was lined with dead grass and sand to cushion the prisoners, in the same way that you would cushion an animal at the zoo.

The two captives sat at separate ends of the cage. Rainbow sat and stared out at the empty sandy tarane before her while pinkie stared at dash, hurt that dash refused to talk to her.

“I just thought that he might have known the way.”

“Ya, well congratulations, pinkie! Now we will probably be sold off as sex slaves or something in the middle of fucking nowhere, and we may never see ponyville ever again. Good job. Want an award for your outstanding achievement?” Rainbow burst at her pink friend, venting rage that had been building in her since she got thrown into the cage.

“I just... I-I’m sorry”

“Just shut up. Seriously.”

A tear dropped from pinkies sea blue eyes. Her hair deflated and turned strate.

The whole mess started when Pinkie had decided to throw dash a party over at suggercube corner. The cap they had taken went lost trying to get there, and when they couldn't produce a proper fee for the cap, they were marooned in the middle of the desert.

Rainbow Dash glanced at pinkie, and saw that she was still looking at dash with tears swelling up in her eyes. Dash walked slowly over to the giant hamster bottle and examined it carefully. There was no dignified way to drink from it. She would have to bend down and suckle on it like a filly drinking from a bottle. The cyan pegasuses pride was already hurting at being locked in the cage like a zoo attraction.

She bent down so that her front hooves were laying flat on the ground at ninety degree angles with her flank high in the air. She nervously cast glances to the ponies in black garb who were watching her with what seemed to be lack of interest. Their expression could not be easily read through the black cloth masks. She then looked at Pinkie and saw that the pony was laying down with tears flowing and small subtle whimpers emanating from her mouth, still staring at Rainbow Dash.

She felt uncomfortable with her pink companion watching her so intently as she was drinking like an animal.

“Can you, like, look away or something? You're starting to creep me out”

Without a word, the pink pony pivoted her head away from her, long glossy straight hair tossed to the side as her head moved. Rainbow Dash proceed to drink, when finished she walked back to her corner and stared out of the care at the fastly moving aria.

“hay Dashie?”

“What?”

“I'm still sorry. I’ll make it up to you. I promise I will somehow”

The rainbow pegasus felt a pang of guilt for making pinkie so desperately ashamed. She was mad at the situation, but not necessary at Pinkie. The desperation in the pink pony’s voice was almost tangible. She never wanted to hurt Pinkie.

“Uhm, yah. It’s fine. I'm sorry for lashing out at you like that. I just frustrated, that's all.”

“But you're right, it is all my fault. I'm just so.... sorry.”

“hay,” Rainbow Dash walked over to her, and smiled softly at her “It’s all gonna be okay.”

Pinkie smiled tenderly back at her. The twinkle in her eyes sent a shudder down Dash’s spine. Not a bad shutter, but a good one. Like her heart had skipped a beat.

The cage was driven off to the side into a littlke village. Rusty shakes lay scattered across this corner of the desert. Rainbow Dash cast a glance at Pinkie in confusion. One of the black garbed men started to set up an umbrela that he would use as shade while another grabed a cooler and pulled a few beer bottles out and tossed them to his confederates. The third pony begen to shout out to the vilige:

“Slaves!! slaves!! get your fresh slaves hear. 300 bits”

“Hay who the hel are you anyways?” dash shouted at the sailspony.

“Why, you don't recognise me? Ha! I should have known.”

The pony pulled the cloth down from his face. Another pony did the same.

In unison, they sang:

“We're the world famous flim flam brothers; traveling sailponys!!!”

“I should have guessed...” Dash went and sat by pinkie. Ponies were notw starting to come out of tthere shacks and gather around the cage. Rainbow Dash never felt more humiliated in her life. Pinkie gentaly nuzzled her side.

“It’s okay dashie, well find a way out of this.”

She felt like arguing with Pinkie, but she decided to just let it be. Random shouts were eminating from the small crowd gathered around the captives:

“I want the pink one”

“The Rainbow one looks like he could work hard”

“Yah, I want him. He looks athletic. He could mow my lawn for me.”

“Defanatly. He could do heavy lifting.”

“the pink one looks sexy.”

Rainbow Dash lacked the will to argue with them and clarified that she is not a stallion. Besides, she figured that if they thought she was a stallion, chances of her being sold as some sort of sex slave were far less. Rainbow dash felt her heart sink into her chest when she glanced at Pinkie Pie. The pink mare was indeed very attractive. And Rainbow Dash feared that she knew exactly what would happen to Pinkie when she gets sold off.

In that moment, she decided that wherever she is sent to, she would escape, find Pinkie Pie, and escape together back to equestria.


Pinkie smiled sadly at Dash. The hopelessness of the situation tugged at Dash’s heart. Pinkie leaned in and laid snuggled up next to the multi colored pegasus, drawing comfort from knowing that she was in the presence of somepony that cared for her.

Dash leaned over, ignoring the shouting crowd as if it wasn’t there, and gave Pinkie Pie a gentle kiss on the forehead. She looked up with big blue eyes that sparkled under the sun, and a bright hopeful smile on her face.

“No matter what, pinkie,” dash spoke softly into her companions ear “I’ll break looses, and I will find you. We can run back to Equestria. We’ll get outa this.”

“I love you, Rainbow dash.”

“I love you too Pinkie Pie.”

Comments ( 26 )

you know i liked that it was interesting, some spelling errors need to be fixed but im nopony special either :derpytongue2:

Seems good, too sleepy to read it now, but check your punctuation (quotation marks and periods and whatnot) and capitalization (dashie and dash should be Dashie and Dash) and change "sead" to "said." But it does look interesting, and I shall be back later.

Why is this labeled complete?
:twilightoops:

Seems interesting. I will wait for more :rainbowkiss:

Well the Random tag certainly fits, and I spose the Romance one does too, but beyond that...

Did you somehow accidentally mark this as complete? It completely feels like there should be more to me.

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I actualy wanted to end it right there. but if you guys want more I would be happy to make more. I was shooting for the "open to interpratation" type of ending.

460175 personally, I think this could go all the way to Cloudsdale if you did it right! I'd really like to see more, but whatever you wanna do is cool too. :rainbowwild:

460238

>if you did it right

Uhm, was that a sly insolt or am i just being overly sensitive?

and yes, im thinking about wether I should continue it or not. =]

If you don't want to complete it you could pass it off to someone who will. Original stories are hard to come by so I know someone would be happy to pick it up. If you don't want it that is.:fluttershysad:

462052

You want it? =) :heart:
I honestly just wanted to end it there. But I trust that you have great ideas. Im a great shipping author, but evrything elts I wright....... well, you can see my page and youll see what I mean :P so Coming up with Ideas is no problem for me =)

460815 lawl wut? No i wasn't insulting you xD I just think you could do a great job at continuing this if you wanted...
hmm, maybe I worded that last comment badly....

464225
LOL =D I gues. I'LL continue the story at my pleases though. Im working on quite a few others right now so its hard to juggle them all. And frankly, this is last on my list of priority of fics to do. But it is on the list =) And I will do it.

462065 I would like to continue this story, but I wouldn't do it as shipping. (moral standards are too high, but I'm still in the tolerate group) Though I don't know if I would have time right now. Hm I'll take the story and get to it in a month or two, but you should probably find another person who would do the shipping version for those who want it.

464603 totally awesome by me :rainbowkiss:

464695

Naww, I alredy got it on my list of things to do for the day =D Im going to continue it myself. I just finished wrighting a 6,000 word story (I wright like a maniac) so Im free for the time (Unless work/friends/shit calls).
And yah, its shipping :scootangel:

464761
holla that

Holy shit man first I had to kill syco-pinky,,, now I've got kill these two assholes .....fuck I love my job:rainbowwild:.....MMMOOORRREEE:flutterrage:

That wasn't bad. Several spelling errors and punctuation things, which distracted from the story, though. Interesting to read and I understand your open to interpretation thing, but I was expecting some action! :rainbowwild: I like it this way, but I'd love an alternate ending. :derpytongue2:

What the Hay am I reading?

Seriously, this is stupid on so many levels. This whole chapter has no point whatsoever. :ajbemused:

484078

welcome to my mentality :pinkiehappy:

460175
it was starting to get good xD,
please continue xD

DO A SEQUAL please

Just work on grammar and...
SEQUAL!!!!

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