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Pinkie and Rainbow Dash get captured in a strange country by two mysterious slave merchants.
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Wat.
you know i liked that it was interesting, some spelling errors need to be fixed but im nopony special either
Seems good, too sleepy to read it now, but check your punctuation (quotation marks and periods and whatnot) and capitalization (dashie and dash should be Dashie and Dash) and change "sead" to "said." But it does look interesting, and I shall be back later.
Why is this labeled complete?
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Seems interesting. I will wait for more
Well the Random tag certainly fits, and I spose the Romance one does too, but beyond that...
Did you somehow accidentally mark this as complete? It completely feels like there should be more to me.
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I actualy wanted to end it right there. but if you guys want more I would be happy to make more. I was shooting for the "open to interpratation" type of ending.
460175 personally, I think this could go all the way to Cloudsdale if you did it right! I'd really like to see more, but whatever you wanna do is cool too.
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>if you did it right
Uhm, was that a sly insolt or am i just being overly sensitive?
and yes, im thinking about wether I should continue it or not. =]
If you don't want to complete it you could pass it off to someone who will. Original stories are hard to come by so I know someone would be happy to pick it up. If you don't want it that is.
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You want it? =)
I honestly just wanted to end it there. But I trust that you have great ideas. Im a great shipping author, but evrything elts I wright....... well, you can see my page and youll see what I mean :P so Coming up with Ideas is no problem for me =)
460815 lawl wut? No i wasn't insulting you xD I just think you could do a great job at continuing this if you wanted...
hmm, maybe I worded that last comment badly....
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LOL =D I gues. I'LL continue the story at my pleases though. Im working on quite a few others right now so its hard to juggle them all. And frankly, this is last on my list of priority of fics to do. But it is on the list =) And I will do it.
462065 I would like to continue this story, but I wouldn't do it as shipping. (moral standards are too high, but I'm still in the tolerate group) Though I don't know if I would have time right now. Hm I'll take the story and get to it in a month or two, but you should probably find another person who would do the shipping version for those who want it.
464603 totally awesome by me
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Naww, I alredy got it on my list of things to do for the day =D Im going to continue it myself. I just finished wrighting a 6,000 word story (I wright like a maniac) so Im free for the time (Unless work/friends/shit calls).
And yah, its shipping
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holla that
Holy shit man first I had to kill syco-pinky,,, now I've got kill these two assholes .....fuck I love my job
.....MMMOOORRREEE
That wasn't bad. Several spelling errors and punctuation things, which distracted from the story, though. Interesting to read and I understand your open to interpretation thing, but I was expecting some action!
I like it this way, but I'd love an alternate ending. 
What the Hay am I reading?
Seriously, this is stupid on so many levels. This whole chapter has no point whatsoever.
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welcome to my mentality
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it was starting to get good xD,
please continue xD
lol
DO A SEQUAL please
Moar
Just work on grammar and...
SEQUAL!!!!