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Well i like this a lot so thumb up and fave


Color me interested. I have to see where this is going.

Twilight Sparkle wakes up on an alter in front of a crowd

alter - To change the form or structure of.
altar - A table or similar flat-topped structure used for religious rites.

Edit: And now that I've tried to read the story, I see that there were many other errors in word choice, plus several times as many punctuation errors. You should find yourself an editor.

I see you are back Princess Serra. And apparently feeling much better if the amazing chapter I just read is anything to go by.

4844322 It has been a long time since I have time to myself, many things have been appearing to falter my chance to be myself, though I had a few story's I have to catch up with I wanted to release this one so that I could get back into writing once again. Its good to be back, it feels amazing to do something fun for a while :pinkiehappy::heart:

4844330 I'm glad you are back , little Princess. And I hope things get better for you in your kingdom.
p.s. how do you make your profile pic?

4844334 It took me two hours to do, simple outline of a pony and then putting a back drop of a galaxy behind that I altered and Photoshopped in my programs. :pinkiehappy:

4844334 it looks great. Went from extremely cute to serious. But now you cant use the puppy-dog look either, Princess.

4844401 It is the teenage version of Serra before she had ascended, mother always said I had a mischievous look before I became my age. She said even though the drawing doesn't have human features that the smile was definitely something I use to do, funny that she is comparing me to a cartoon pony. :twilightoops:

4844407 Yes, I remember the tales of the mischievous Serra. However I always new she would do great things(although hiding Celestia's cake stash is probably at the top of the list as far as her greatest pranks go). Does Serra like her new position and the castle that came with it?

4844422 it is the greatest present by far, it pleases me that I can prank Celestia with Luna, she has quite the sense of humor :scootangel: though Celestia attempted to hide my chocolate lately, which ended in a lot of apple pie in the dining room :facehoof: it would not wash from the chairs for quite a while

4844427 I'm glad you like it. May next we can hide Luna's video games.:moustache::rainbowlaugh:

4844482 So have you decided where you want me to put your castle?

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Oi. You two. Roleplaying is banned. Has been for months.
So, you know, cut that out.


Consequently, I am banning role playing from the site in all locations. User pages, blog posts, groups, consider it banned everywhere now. It does not contribute to the site in any way other that destroying the servers.

The official blog post

i'm really hoping twilight at least get's angry at the 'apostles' for not telling her this would happen.

I'm lost but great bloody story:pinkiehappy:

4901872 I have to agree. but just to reiterate......HUH?:rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh:

Okay they said 6 planets each a copy of 1 in the multiverse so shouldnt there be 6 twilights? also i want more chapters:heart:

Very nice story you have here so far, I would love to see more of this in the future. :twilightsmile:

Okay I have only 1 reaction to this story. :rainbowhuh: uuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I hope your not dead that would suck

6273401 nope, not dead yet, still in a hospital, but not dead yet

6273535 damn still in the hospital that sucks just a little less than being dead ,confined to bed bored to death with a tv and supposedly terrible food (except the food court)

6273542 thats if I was allowed out of the ICU, I am alowed my small tablet that I requested being in here but I am only allowed on it so much a day. Apart from that it really does get really boring. But I have been in here for this long, may as well tuff it out and see if I am strong enough for my Op, a couple months back my Doc said it shouldnt be long so fingers crossed.

Cryptic but interesting. I would like to see more of this story.

Liked the idea from chapter 1 but chapter 2 kills the mood.....may I suggest a reboot?

when can we expect the next chapter?

Comment posted by thedarkalicorn deleted Aug 13th, 2018

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

Interesting story. Would love to see more. :twilightsmile:

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