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@FLUTTERxxDASH...
Just a quick note... You probably should add a Twilight Sparkle tag (Basic Twilight, not Princess Twilight), even when using Internet Rule #63 with Dusk Shine.
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thank you for the tip, just to clarify, I thought it was for the main cast? anyway I will make the change now, Could I be cheeky and ask for your thoughts on the more intimate moments of the story as this is my first clop? Please
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Oh I did not read the fan-fiction (no malicious intent, just a statement). R-63 male-male clops are not my cup of tea, so I would not be a good judge of it anyway.
However, I assumed that since both the story summary and the cover picture depict Dusk Shine, he was part of the primary cast.
Even when using Internet Rule #63, the appropriate characters' tags should still be used accordingly.
For example: if you used Dusk Shine, Barb(ara), Elusive, and Berry Pie (or Bubble Berry), then you would need to use the tags for Twilight Sparkle, Spike, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie, respectively.
Likewise, you also need to state in your story summary that you are using R-63 characters. (Obviously you already did, but it had to be stated again here.)
Clarity towards the reader audience is an important storytelling factor & tool.
Hope that helped.
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Thank You so much, this is my first R-63 so I didn't know that, Sorry its not what you are in to but thank you so much for taking your time to give me some help
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Glad to provide guidance &/or advice
. I stopped to Comment because while R-63 male-male clop is not my preference, I noted you wrote a 10 000+ word-count chapter to start off with. And that is what caught my attention.
A hale-&-hearty word-count per chapter shows the reader audience that the Author put in the [time + effort] toward their work(s). So even if you do not "wow!" your reader audience, you still get to hold your head high.
I need 1 picture of the fab-ulized dusk shine stat
Dear sir/madame... may I ask you something? I didn't read the fic, and for that I apologize for but it is very late here. I just wanted to ask you: have you noticed a sudden influx of Dusk Shine ships since Philiac made the front page?
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I did in fact yes but the main reason for this fiction was I had many Ideas swirling in my head and I ad to get them out, I took some inspiration from other aspection such as Vampire knight, Special A and HSHC, so some of the uniformed stuff is somewhat not my idea but when I released this I actually read Philiac and really enjoyed it
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Thank you very much then, I was working around eight hours on this and pre read twice so thank you for noticing my hard work
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Oh no! Everypony knows who I am now?! I can't just ask people questions anymore without them thinking of how to respond based on my repertouire!
All my mixed emotions about popularity aside, I personally think anypony who can expand on the premise of gender roles is a good writer. Keep writing my friend.
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Hehehe, Thats what happens when your awesome at what you do, you are a brilliant writer and I cannot wait for the next chapter of Philiac to come out, I personally think that R-63 fictions and certain clops are disliked but depending on who writes it, and the way they write it is what makes the story popular.
So on that note, that is why I think your story is one of my favorites, it is beautifully written
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To be honest I actually thought I would have a lot more dislikes than five as many I have read that have Dusk Shine remotely near being homosexual having a lot more downvotes so I am very happy
Lastly thank you thank you than you thank you for commenting on my story, I bow down to you, I have actually Spoken to somepony really popular Yaaaaaaaaa~
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Crazy thing is that, a week ago, nopony knew who the hell I was! All you need is a good premise and anypony can make front page. Before I decided on Philiac I was thinking about a shipfic between Scootaloo and Cockatrice. Whether that would have made a front page... nopony can know! The point is, original ideas, and old ones being interpreted in a new way, are the ones people enjoy reading.
You can have an upvote, on the house!
3704238 EEEEEEE!!
YOU!!, I have watched and Favorited Philiac and will wait for the upcoming brilliance of the next chapter 
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*Le reminds me I have to work on chapter 3.
Uhm... thanks for the compliments, it feels good to be recognized and such, but I haven't even started on chap. 3. I'll catch you later, you can PM me anytime. I just really have to get off my butt and do work now.
I'm liking this story already and I can't wait for more.
Keep up the good work and update soon please.
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Will do, thanks for the comment
The like dislike has been pretty even so far, not too bad
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You're welcome. You wouldn't happen to be able to recommend any stories that are similar to this one, would you?
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It's surprising, most of the r63 stories I see get downvoted pretty hard.
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I completely agree, thats why I was surprised with so little amount of downvotes.
I like this perspective. It's not something I've seen before, and, for the moment, you have my fave.
On a personal note, I find the scene transitions rather jarring. The whole "BACK AT THE MANOR" in bold thing really messes with the flow. I'd strongly recommend practicing integrating scene transitions into the text as you are reading it. You should really avoid using BOLD and the like except in certain circumstance, (The Royal Canterlot voice for example). It really doesn't fit in most forms of literature other than, say, chapter breaks (Which should be done sparingly if possible) or a play. Just my 2 cents.
3739735 Thank you for the tip my friend, I will have a look at that later and make the corrections, I am still a bit new on writing fictions as I've only been writing for three months so I still have a lot of practice to do
The only real problem I have with this story is the grammar >.<. ( I love it otherwise)
BTW did you by any chance get inspiration from the fanfic Philiac?
3742902 Alittle, but for other references search these, Special A / vampire knight / reversible high school / and I cant remember the rest but these were the few that had the idea rolling around my head, when I saw Philiac I just went bugger it I am going to start it hehe
3743286 YAY FOR DUSK SHINE SHIPS~!
*Bounces around and blows up Pinkie's party canon.* Whoopeeeeee!
I'm half way through the story and it looks great, kinda like Philiac but with more characters in the scene, which I reallllllyy like. I loved how you didn't make ALL the characters rule 63'd. Like others, the only problem I have is grammar. If I may be so bold to ask, I really like your fic and would like to proofread it, if you'd like.
3745133 YES YES YES YES YES I LOV YOU, of course
, I am just around halfway through the second chapter, see to the end of chapter one and then if you still like it then okie dokie, YAY~
I'm in love with this
3745157 I've just finished the first chapter, it's a little too fast for my liking, but it's not half bad, I still love it and would still love to proof-read it. Would you like to take it to PM's?
What.....will... happen....next~? Mwahahaha! 
I tried to send you one just now but FiMFic somehow said you didn't exist.....
Anywho~ I loved the cliffhanger~! Hehehe.....
Looks like Dusk is about to be disowned...after he wakes up from getting the taste punched outta his muzzle. So, when is the next chapter?
3799967 just working through details so it shouldn't be too long, I bet you will be quite surprised with what will happen
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I'm worried for the future of this story... It's been quite a while since you said soon... I'm not tryin to rush you, but I'd hate to see a rare gem of this to drop off...
Shame this hasn't been updated =<
4663470 I am so so sorry, RL is really at me at the moment and I am trying my best to get free time, tis is one of my more lengthier stories so each chapter is longer than my others meaning it takes a bit more time. But alas I have to go to work over summer hol's to pay for tuition for my next semester leaving me with like 30 mins a day to myself, literally just got in myself 15 mins ago and saw the comment.... hopefully after september comes I can get the ball rolling again, get the mental juices on the web and finally get something done but I do apologise profusely about no updates
4663596 totally didn't expect such a fast reply, and tha is completely fine and happy to hear that. I just thought I had come across another glorious fic that has been dead for a while, happy to hear otherwise
Has this been forgoten?
5883125 I've been in the hospital for around 11 months, when I'm back on my feet, I will carry on my stories
5884690 ouch
8029978 I'm alright, still got a bad ticker but I can't do much about that for now, had a few ops and seems to be okay at the moment. As for the story, at the moment I'm focusing more on the other stories if you look at my profile page, though I may pop a chapter out of my other stories every now and again.