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Fifty Shades of Yellow


Mainly focused on Fluttershy; however, that doesn't mean I won't try someone else.

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- Second Person Point of View -
Throughout your entire high school life, you have always stuck with a great group of friends. But during the years, things were surely complicated. These the toughest four years of your life, new problems arise every day, and you're not the only one that suffers this. You and Fluttershy go through more than what the average teenager encounters, and it's only the two of you that can help each other. Yet during these rough years, there's just something that you couldn't get a grasp of.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 19 )

Interesting concept.

good story, and you earned your thumbs up but you definitely need an editor and I hate to say it but it shows a lot. I'll be watching.

Awesome story! Can't wait for more! :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

It feels like the meeting with the rest of the girls seemed forced, at least that's how it seemed to me.

So, when's the next chapter coming up?

Fluttershy is really adorable in this chapter.

i was waiting forever for this chapter can't wait for the next one

This is a really interesting concept, how does a girl that's got praticly no social skills whatsoever act when a guy her own age offers his hand in friendship?
Looking foward to the next chapter, keep it up!

Holy shit I'm oblivious. . . BUT MORE PLZ. . .

Was that a Fallout 3 reference I saw in there? Great story, I'm really looking forward to reading the rest and a sequel if there is one!
:raritywink:

This is very interesting. Fluttershy definitely has a crush on him and from the way she acted in the other chapters she a lot of social and mental needs. I wonder how she is going to act when she finds out that his friends are all girls and that their numbers are in his cell phone? I think I see an obsession with her. I mean going as far as to have Norman get moved to her old seat just so she can sit next to him.

Also I wonder about Flash Sentury. Can't wait to see more of him.

Your stories are great! Please update them!:pinkiehappy:

Rereading this, I STILL WANT AN UPDATE SOON PLZ!!

Ugh... the idea is great, it's really has gotten into me. But... this goddamn anime sendrom, when a shy guy gets all the girls for doing pretty much nothing and just being kind to them. It's not working that way irl.

We need an update please

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