- Shifting Second Person Point of View -
Everyone in school is preparing for the holidays. Everyone, except you. The seven girls try to unravel the mystery and try to cheer you (Anon) up.
Mainly focused on Fluttershy; however, that doesn't mean I won't try someone else.
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Wait, whose POV was that? It's kinda confusing...
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It started off with Sunset, then it went to Twilight when they split up, and then back to Sunset after Twilight was done.
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Please in the next chapter be more clear about that. Maybe some sort of indicator? Example: (PoV: Sunset Shimmer)
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Sure, I will keep that in mind. Thank you for the idea, and there you are. Chapter 1 is now fixed with the issue.
I understand that Anon wants to keep things to himself, but...WHY THE COOKIES!? WHY ANON, WHY!? *clears throat* I mean, if I was Anon, I would at least keep them instead of destroying them. He better have a good reasoning behind that.
Thanks for taking my advice on the first chapter, made it much easier to understand who was who. Or would it be who I was?
Anyways, keep up the good work!
There is a anon tag now
Poor anon thats so cruel.
7901550 I feel like if we find out more has happened to him it can justify what his done a bit more because if it was just like this every christmas your still the one in the wrong doing what his been doing
I don't care if his family locked him outside during Christmas if someone told me some asshat sprayed his own piss at them I would flip shit at him, he would literally never piss again (or walk for that matter)
This is really crap. I don't feel bad for anon in the slightest bit.
I'd be more inclined to feel sympathy for him if he didn't just shoot a water gun full of his own piss at them. So it kinda kills any sympathy you're supposed to have for him.
What a bunch of terrorist they were being! 9/11 much?
This story is literally just what I need. I just got out of a hospital and I am not waiting till December to find out what happens to "Anon."
In a wierd way I resemble this Am on more than the Mane 7
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You don't have to. I bet he
cutskills himselfI only decorate for Christmas cause I like to punish myself.