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lilinuyasha


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You, sir/madam are either one of the best, or one of the worst authors I have ever read. It takes skill to write a story so poorly that I have to read it in chunks, alternating with bleach shots, but surround it by a perfect explanation, fully in character, of something I could see in the show.

In conclusion, you get a thumbs up. Never try to write that poorly again.

Well, you could read my other stories and make your own judgement.

Today I've read a whole lot of really bad clop. Yours is the first to deserve an upvote. Congratulations!

4805879 Intentionally bad clop, mind you. At least my clop smells like fruit medley.

Im reading this because your name is InuYasha. Needs more Tentsaiga o3o

This makes me think of the 90's movie Medallion. Its so bad its funny XD




Thumbs up

4805940 That was the point, dearie. Glad you enjoyed.

This was... I don't... bwuh?

I think this made a part of my brain melt out of my right ear. But, since it wasn't my left ear I think it should be fine. This story was so terribad...

I think the phrase "What is this I don't even" applies. To be honest I don't even know what I expected to be getting into... Whelp. I guess I'll have to take a page out of Rarity's book and go chug down some brain bleach. Thanks, friend!

...This was so bad, but I can't stop laughing!

4807864 Glad you liked it. Upvote? Tell your friends?

Well I read it twice and it was hilarious. Thumbs up.

Leave it to Twilight to misunderstand the wordplay in a textbook. I do think the textbook she was reading from was a little... basic, for reference material. It didn't feel like something you'd see in a guide. But I imagine that was point, just so Twilight could read that stuff. How she's absolutely baffled by the entire topic too was a little unbelievable. I would have thought she'd have known something to do with genitalia, especially her own. Taken under Celestia's personal wing as a student or not, she still would have been taught it. Sex-ed can be considered mandatory, and I don't think Twilight would have been an exception, regardless of her position.

But then again, Twilight being clueless was the joke, which I'll admit, was pretty damn funny. Seeing her pretty much copy-paste the textbook into what she wrote was just genius. Especially that crane part. Oh god, that cracked me up.

"I am secreting my pheromone."

This character should have been Maud. Seriously, everything this mare said was Maud. If you did that, Pinkie could have made some comment about Twilight using her sister too.

And I agree with Twilight. Researching anatomy with diagrams can get a little dodgy. You get a like for this. Good job.

Her story... Wow... *slow clap* That was majestic, well done. :moustache:
I'll be thumbing up and favoriting.

5010642 Still not as good as Twilight's, but i tried.

5011086 Glad you think so.

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