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The romance was very nice and I loved the pacing, both characters were also really likeable. My only complaint is that the last couple of paragraphs were really bulky and that made it kind of hard to read.
5448080 Some people like longer paragraphs because it keeps the flow and actions in one concise area.
5457127 Ah, well for me those paragraphs just seem to kind of drag on and on and I actually think it makes the paragraph less interesting to read.
WHat's really strange is that I haven't seen paragraphs like these in your other stories. I know because I read "Coco's assistant" and favorited "Twilight buys a clopbot" Because...it was awesome, for lack of a better word.
5457390 I didn't write either of those stories, bro.
5457550 Whoops...the list on the side used to be for stories written by the same author. Well...I feel stupid.
5458609 But you're welcome to read my others. This is the only real erotic one I have. (Ponies writer erotica is just parody) All the others are puns on stuff. You might enjoy them. If you like romance, that's my specialty.
Kinda wish there would have been a real ending. I mean the character is only there for a week, what about that relationship? I doubt either would want to have him leave. The high point was them rutting and then it was ended just as quickly with no following context.