Come read about the comedic misadventures of two colts and their insane, hyper curious, fun loving, danger seeking friend. Join Spirit Shift, Bionic Force, and Blazing Notes on their adventures throughout Equestria to document, research, and most likely fight, new and completely undiscovered creatures.
Facehoof as they struggle to survive when Spirit blows all their money on custom action figures. Laugh as Notes somehow manages to strike out on literally every mare on Equestria. Cower behind a lead wall when Bionic Force attempts to mix Dark Magic and Napalm. And sit on the edge of your seat when they take up jobs as Monster Hunters on a whim, tasked with taking down a rampaging octopus beast.
Main Character descriptions
Cover Art Drawn by YoursTruly
Collab with Bionic Force
Pre/Beta/Proof Read by: Lunaisthebest and Lightning Sword
IF you had won the coin flip, what would you have called it then?
Other than that i found it hilarious but some points were a bit hard to understand, and some characters seem... out of context at times.
Did they really?
huh.. well funny story, I actually didn't have any idea what I would name it so I chose I cheated the coin flip so I wouldn't have to. lol 
typical laziness on my part 
But I didnt expect him to pick that name.....
That's when I knew I was in for some fun. Great start to a story, by the way!
4923092 lol really I thought the mention of a strip club would be a better indicator
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Admittedly, I was a bit confused about why a race of nudists would even have a strip club.
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then you understand
I had to read this before anything else. First of all, great characters. They seem to follow the sort of off-the-wall anime ensemble style (the reckless kid, the brain, the horndog, the sweet lady, and the strong broad
). Second, I liked the interesting (if a bit unconventional) narrative style. That flashback had me laughing the whole time! (FALCON HOOF! Love it!) Finally, a very interesting, mature look at My Little Pony that seems to pay homage to the plot, visuals, and structure of many Square Enix games. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this.
Definite thumbs-up!
You know, this is how most characters from video games and D&D campaigns would come across in real life. Bionic Force is officially one of my favorite characters of all time now!
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5018765 Done
edit:
WWWHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! LASERBEAMS!!!!
Having been an editor for this story, I've already given my opinions on it, but I must say, they bear repeating. Great comedic situations for likable characters, with some great action to pick up the pace. Definitely looking forward to more of this, as a reader or editor (if you need one).
BTW, thanks for the shout-out!
Hello
5040764 Sup, Welcome to Fimfiction Notes
>>spirit shift thank you lad
Ah! My sides! They hurt!
~WARBLE WARBLE WARBLE WARBLE~
5040767 hey spirit you mind sending me my pic lad
Well, that party went pretty well even if t girls' got a un-tentional visit from Shift durin Spirit's lil flashback
. Anyways, guess up next is t rest of said memory thru Shift's POV 
; of course as long as nopony else interupts him again 
NEVER. EVER. EVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR.
I'm not entirely sure why, but that made me laugh harder than anything else this chapter, and that's saying something.
5220382 That's what's gonna happen if Shift doesn't get his drink in time
Ok, Shift's definitly havin probs gettin even one drink tonite
. Oh well he'll get somethin eventually; just maybe not before t "show" starts if this keeps up 
As soon as I read the title, I knew this was going to be good. I was proven right after only just four sentences.
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Sheesh, i'm glad i don't hav any of these ponies as friends
. I mean Notes n' Spirit seem al'rite enough 
but, Bi n' Shift giv me some concerns 
. Especially if Shift causes a fite just for his own buckin amusement 
. Sure it's funny to watch as long as it doesn't happenin to u 
I love how this whole "Shift's story" part seemed to play out like anime filler. It really perpetuates the anime feel to the story. Looking forward to the next "story arc", as it were.
5241227 I love that you feel that way because that was exactly what I was going for. That and I wanted to introduce Shift in an awesome way
*slowclap*
Damn, I'm really off lately. Forgot to put an end quote on that one.
by killing them?
Aw, poor Soul. Tricked by the lowest trick in the book.
"Sorry, but the princess is in another castle,"
"Sorry, but Spirit is in another dragon,"