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Coco Pommel is just a humble fashion designer in Manehattan. With no time for friends, relationships, and barely any time for food, how could she possibly learn to have fun?

Unfortunately, it seems that the best way to know is to have a really bad day.

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5247241 Thank you. I felt like writing something adorable, and while I feel it could have turned out better, I'm glad you enjoyed.

5255565 Glad you enjoyed :)

I would say it was surprisingly adorable, but with you it's pretty much always adorable, so there's no surprise. TL:DR I liked it.

Hmm. I was thinking... when you mentioned Coco's run-down home, it reminded me of an idea I had some time ago for a tale of someone whose life was ruined by a false accusation, eventually becoming destitute, vilified by his neighbours, poor in health, until a kind soul took pity on him, risking their image. I ought to get on that, now that I think about it.

5260825 Glad you found it up to the standard adorbs of which you're accustomed to with me. How's life?

5263014 Fairly well. I've been putting on weight so I'm trying to get back into shape. I'm not nearly as... "unstable", shall we say, as before; in fact, I'd like to think I'm just about "normal" by this point. Been writing a fan fiction for a Fire Emblem game, so that's been taking up quite a bit of time. Oh well.

How are things going with you, my fine-feathered friend (alliteration!)?

5263070 Alas...all alliterations are annoying. My alliterations are awesome, actually, as i'm an awesome alliterator.

I'm glad you're doing well, man. It's been good being here for you for a while.

I'm glad you liked it. i thought it may have been a little too slow, but i felt like writing something new and adorable so I'm happy with how it turned out.

What a wonderful romance story. It was great seeing Coco again even though she was only in Rarity takes Manehatten and recently in the season 4 finale. Thank you for writing this fan fiction. I really enjoyed it.

5265272 I've always had a soft spot for Coco, and I wanted to write something adorable. I felt like Coco needs some love in her life, so this came out. I'm glad you enjoyed. I have lots of other romance stories you might enjoy, also.

Oh no, I think this story gave me diabeetus! Why would you do this to me, Trey?! WHY?! :raritydespair:

But in all seriousness, this was a really cute story. The name "Chocolate Pop" is a bit iffy for me, but otherwise he came off as a very realistic character with, well, character. You showed that he has strengths and weaknesses, as well as a kind and chivalrous heart. Just curious, but does his prosthetic leg end at the knee down, or flank? Anyway, Coco is a pretty under appreciated character, so it was fun seeing your adorable take on her. The two's interactions came off as not only cute, but something of how a happy couple would act when first getting to know each other. Makes me hope that their relationship builds into an even stronger one.

Overall, solid work, Trey! Hope this fic gets more recognition, or they'll really be missing out. :twilightsmile:

(P.S. You should totally make a romance story with Celestia. :trollestia:)

5311072 Celestia? BUT SHE TOTALLY maybe.

5311072

Well, I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reading. Just for that, I MIGHT make a celestia fic soon.

5312670
:yay:

(Might be pushing my luck, but it could be a collab fic, if ya want.)

5313335 Go read Maternal Investigations and tell me why I should ever try a collab again. :fluttershyouch:

5314092 It all depends on if you and your partner are on the same page, to which if the contrast writing was anything to go by in that fic, the two of you were not. :rainbowwild:

I love this story. I love that coco pommel is a very believe character.

This story reminded me that the way to meet girls is to be nice to them, buy them food, compliment them, and randomly drop by their workplace. :rainbowlaugh:

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