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Spinner of Tales


Hi. My name is Tale Spinner, and I like to read about adorable ponies doing adorable things.

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You get a like just for the intro
-cracks knuckles- time to commence reading

Contains: Lesbian horses

You got me at 'Lesbian Horses' :heart: (also because... you know, it's you and every Clopfic you do is pure gold)

sexy and romantic, i like it

I wish someone would write a straight story about Sassy Saddle

Aaaaawww double the love . :heart: oh and lol:rainbowlaugh:

Outline provided by The Abyss.

What kind of outline could there be?

Abyss: "Okay so, make these three ponies have sex."

"Abyss ... you've done it again!"

6804305 Abyss does full-chapter outlines (actions, thoughts, dialogues) for $8. It's basically the bare bones of the story.

6802514 I hope it was good enough to validate the like!


6802762 6803752 Thanks for taking the time to read my story. I hope y'all liked it!


6802564 Awww... thanks :heart:

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6804347

...Huh?

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This is outlining. What you just described Abyss supplying is a poorly executed story with little narrative and way too much exposition. Do yourself a favor: Outline your own work in your own way. The outline is the core of your story. It's the notes that you jot down to remember those errant thoughts that run rampant through your head about your story when you can't write. It will keep your narrative tight and focused on your armature and your theme.

Plus, it's free.

6804305 Haha, if only it was that simple. I spend about an hour or two writing commissioned outlines. If you're curious as to what the one looked like for this one, click here.

6804413 Thanks, Abyss. Sometimes, the best way to explain something is to just show it to 'em, yeah? :twilightsmile:

6804447 Oh...

... Well, I hope you enjoyed three ponies having sex! :twilightsheepish:

6804367
Oh it was indeed, liked and added to the bookshelf

This was really great I loved it

6973934 Thanks very much SSj2PinkiePie I appreciate that.

Im so enjoying this hahahahahaah

I like the idea but there are a few improvement points. When Coco is suckling it's very unclear what she is doing. Is she sucking milk out or not? I would expect a description of how the milk tastes or something like that. She says she "wanted" to but saves it for later so does that mean she doesn't suckle after all?

Both sexy and sweet as well.

6804413
Before I start, I apologize to the author of this story. This isn't for you, and I haven't read your story. This is directed towards The Abyss. I am not going out of my way to attempt to beg for forgiveness or anything. I respect your decision to block me, and I honestly haven't been majorly affected by it. However, I gotta question why you did it at all. The issue I had with you was how you handled a real life situation, so once the situation was resolved, I would have stopped, and it would have been like nothing had happened.

Because you aren't here for me to judge based on real life actions, and I can definitely say I did that. I acted out of line, I can agree with that, in terms of how I presented my argument, and I promise you that it won't happen again. However, I enjoy your blog posts and stories, and I like chipping in my two cents.

It's your decision to listen. Think it over, and maybe one day I'll be able to comment on your stuff again. I'm not going to wait around for it, but I wanted to say something to you somehow.

8224936
Apology accepted.

hey will there be a equal to this

In that instant, Coco felt a presence beside her. Looking over, she found Sassy, staring at one of the tears.

Teats.

Heard the error using the Reading function. Left me confused 😂

Very nice
All I'm kinda missing was some horn play by sassy while coco ..you know :3

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I'm glad you liked the story!

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