A Single Wish

In the aftermath of Lesson Zero, a childhood relic finds itself conflicted as new emotions seek to complicate its simple existence, leaving us to wonder: Do raggedy dolls dream of studly stallions?

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Azarune

Azarune #1 · Oct 30th, 2011 · 2 · ·

SOOOOO GREAT now I feel all guilty about my toys. Anyway great story, very moving.

DiStort

DiStort #2 · Oct 30th, 2011 · · ·

Ah, the classic tale of the doll brought to life. Very well written. Nice job.

Appleloosa2011

Appleloosa2011 #3 · Oct 30th, 2011 · · ·

Thanks!

I'm a newbie and was searching for fics about Applejack and her family.

#4 · Oct 30th, 2011 · · ·

you have reminded me why i keep my childhood toys. this i such a moving story

#5 · Oct 31st, 2011 · · ·

I can't help but hear Discord's voice narrating the mysterious entity, and even though the ending was marvelous I do hold anticipation for another chapter to this delightful tale.

#6 · Nov 1st, 2011 · · ·

and instantly, I feel as if discord did something nice for a change.

#7 · Nov 3rd, 2011 · · ·

Oh wow! That was just...wow! That made me feel SO nostalgic! I must say well done! This made me think of those times when I wouldn't go to sleep without my toys/blanket! XD Good times! I certainly hope you keep up the fine work good sir! Keep writing and I hope to read another story soon!

#8 · Nov 4th, 2011 · · ·

I just can't tell who is with Macintosh in the end. I feel like its fluttershy because of the feather comment but it sounds more like twilight

manonthe3up

manonthe3up #9 · Nov 6th, 2011 · · ·

Wait... That "Fairy Godmother" sounds familiar...
Ethereal voice from nowhere, a voice that sounds airy and amused, the power to make a doll alive, but changes it back at the most awkward time, and sounds like it just peeked into the dolls mind in the first place because it was bored...

It was only a matter of time, wasn't it, Yukari?

Compendium of Steve

Compendium of Steve #10 · Nov 6th, 2011 · · ·

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That would be a pretty neat twist, but the entity referred to himself as a Fairy Godfather.

Jolttix

Jolttix #11 · Nov 8th, 2011 · · ·

You have taken some thing so hard to write about and formed a great work of art. Bravo. Now please write a Rainbow Mac fic. PLEASE!!!!!!!

FlutteringShy

FlutteringShy #12 · Jan 14th, 2012 · 1 · ·

Made me think of the various times I couldn't go to sleep without the comfort of my toys

Excellent story! I feel super guilty about my toys now, and I just might remove them from my closet, give them a super long cuddle, and have a nice snuggly sleep tonight.