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I haven't even read anything except for the description, and I can already tell this will be hilarious
4703942 Believe me I'm not very funny. But I will try my hardest to make it hilariously funny. With character development and feels and all man its gonna be a ride.
Well, this is a.. Ahem, "different" turn than what I expected. Uhh... Oh, and where is Button Mash?
4704025 Well to be honest he wasn't supposed to be in this fic. But while I was at work I thought up a nice surprise about him and his mom. He will show up. Yes he's with Sweetie Belle. He's just not the main character this time. Its nothing bad so don't worry.
4704072 ok. Oh, and you know how peeves some of the characters you are prob going to be working with are, so please make sure to play your cards right. Oh, and how do you know an adverage 15 year old does nothing but cuss his way into being "cool" all day?
4704076 I was 15 once too you know
. And for Rumble's character he kinda like an emo. You'll see why in the next chapter or so. I cant give away all the surprises 
4704111 crud, he's 15 yrs old AND emo? Well Rumble, you are kinda f**ked.
Interesting. The shifting between first and third person is a bit jarring. It would be best to stick with first person. Other than that, it's not a bad start. I look forward to seeing where this is going.
P.S. Contrary to popular belief, wearing two condoms increases the risk of them breaking due to the friction between the two. Breaking condoms typically happens when they've past their expiration or are too small. It can also happen if you keep them in your pocket with keys or something similarly hard and sharp.
4704830 Ok I guess I'm sticking with first person then. And I know about the condom thing. Thunderlane is just that stupid.
You'll see why.
I like you.
4709654 Same to you.
I hope you don't mind me asking, but why are you writing this ? I don't hate, it quite enjoyable actually, like South Park and that show is practically a douchbag to things in the real world.
4748516 Why am I writing this? like what do you mean? It was just an Idea I had that seemed funny enough so here it is.
4751178 What inspired you to write this ?
4751230 Basically, terrible clopfics that get in the featured section, AiEs bad ones,
FUCKING MOTHERLY SCOOTALOO FUCKING PIECE OF GARBAGE!, and stories with no Character Development but people still read it anyway. This story was to vent my frustrations at this damn fandom. Why do you think I have the comedy tag up, my opinions are nothing more than a joke.4751430 Wow, you really hate Motherly Scootaloo.
4751438 With a Passion. If you want something that requires absolutely no work whatsoever. A main I cant even call her a character because she's so fucking flat and so every close to the Mary Sue line that I just ugh. No character development at ALL just I'm this now and everyone is like aw she's so mature now. It DOESNT WORK LIKE THAT
4751496 Dude that's harsh
4751519 But is the truth I'm afraid.
I'm going to be honest here, this is actually the first story I read where it shows hatred towards something.
4865546 Well its just Not one thing. But many things. And I guess you know something about that tumblr huh?
4865574 You hate Tumblr also ?
4865581 No I don't, but it CAN get a little silly sometimes with all the viruses.
4865591
What else you hate ?
4865616 Oh? And why pray tell do you wish to know that?
4865635 Just curious
4865640 Well this is why this story exists. You'll see in time.
4865662 Does this mean you also hate Rumble ?
4865700 No. He's just the main character here. And some other surprises here and there.
So..... Rumbles generic teen #1 with a bad potty mouth...... So author is his favorite music rock ot dubstep? Whatever this was so funny im gonna fav.
4868626 Wubs.