A Pinkie fan hoping to improve her writing.
Pinkie Pie is growing old. She doesn't bounce as she walks anymore and her helicopter is broken. Her friends have achieved their dreams and moved away. She misses their company and wants to go back to the good old days where everything is happiness. Back to her youth where death, pain and suffering doesn't exist. She is determined to... At any cost.
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Trying to change your fate is one thing, trying to change every other creatures though....there is a reason mortals are never given that which they need the most, they can't handle it, it's too powerful besides...how is Death going to do his job if Pinkie tries to rewind time, even gods can't do that...this is going to have consequences the likes no creature would ever dream....I'm in
Though I would very highly recommend a editor and proofreader should you continue
4626237 Hard to do that. My friends have low grammar levels. No offense to them. None of my internet friends usually find my writing good enough to be worth editing.
Don't do it Pinkie. You can't mess with the cycle of life. That's crazy, even for you.
.... This is just going to end so well.
4626422 I can offer assistance in proofreading if you like, though I'm not perfect and can't edit to save my life
Shoot, I was hoping Pinkie would bake a portal like in "friendship is witchcraft"
Very impressive, shame to see Spike still like that of a baby dragon, at least physically, I would have though he would have outgrown use for ponies but I guess being raised by them creates a soft spot, can't blame him. I still feel like this is not going to have the happy ending Pinkie wants though...hmmm