My Little Puny: A Play on Words
When war reaches Equestria, Princess Celstia requires stallions from every family to fight the threat.
Clyde Buckwheat Pie, the father of Pinkie Pie, enlists, leaving behind his family and livelihood. As he enters the battle with little training, he realizes how confusing and sadistic war can get.
But...
Will he make it back?
Or will his family forever be scarred by what may be one of the most brutal conflicts in Equestria's history?
Art is by 2snacks.
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Wait...
Isn't Buckwheat an old stallion now? Pinkie Pie is a full grown mare!
Hes got to be like sixty years old!
Also, why is Pinkie's father the character were focusing on? Why not a main character
that we know about and can relate to? Like Big Macintosh.
I suppose you can chose whatever the hell you wanted but I still think the character
choice was dumb.
War... Eh, no thanks. Concept i guess eh.... different strokes for different folks but, uhm...
not me.
Good concept, hope you develop it further.
A little rushed during some parts but still a good idea. I'll keep track of this story. Good luck.
I wrote a story about a pony war aha. It's...not so similar, but you could check it out. It might help your writing.
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If you wanted Big Mac, then why even take your time to click the story? Complaining over the characters is like to blaming an orange for not being an apple, so to speak.
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I don't care. I felt like griping.
I still think the character choice is a bit strange.