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Ever since the Bearers of the Elements of Harmony had released Discord from his stoney prison, Fluttershy had gone out of her way to make him feel welcome. It was something Discord had taken for granted, enjoying the attention she gave him. When the opportunity arose to fully embrace his chaotic nature once more, he took it gleefully, despite the fact that it meant the betrayal of his friend. He eventually saw the error of his way and received forgiveness, and at first all was well, but on returning home, and with time to think a new emotion is stirring deep within his chaotic heart.

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Comments ( 19 )

This was a good read. None of the character portrayals felt forced and I could see this easily slotting into the canon episodes after the end of season four. The depiction of Discord's mannerisms was spot-on, and everything flowed nicely. I must admit, from reading the discription I was ready to groan and and complain about that feeling being romantic love and not platonic, but not only did you avoid that pitfall of awkwardness, you caused me to laugh aloud when you managed to lampshade that idea itself in his conversation with Derpy. I will keep an eye out for any other stories by the same author.

the FEELS! :raritycry:
I loved your story, I hope to read more soon.

4563361 Thank you for commenting I really appreciate that you took the time to do so.

4563033 Thank you for this wonderful review, you have no idea how much it made me smile. I wanted to keep the description vague, and yes I see now how it could refer to love. Especially since I listed it as romance. I'm not opposed to Fluttercord shipping, but I find the little hints to their friendship throughout the series very sweet and I wished to explore that side of things. Again thank you for your review, I really appreciate you taking the time to do so.

This calls for a feature in Luna's Fanfictions. You will get your stamp later. :)

4570198 Why thank you, I'm just totally speechless, thank you

This was not a romance story. Why did you put that tag on it? :derpyderp2:

4658967 Basically this is the first and to date only story I've posted on FiM and I thought I needed to a category but there was no "Friendship" button or "Platonic love" button and I didn't know what else to put it under. If you have a suggestion out of the available options of a better category I'd happily change it.

Thank you for the comment, all feedback is welcome.

I really enjoyed this. The conversation with Derpy was a nice touch and I could see you really took the time to try and portray the characters the way they really act. Discord acknowledging his guilt and accepting forgiveness was a wonderful theme for a story.

5393510 Thank you for the review. This story stemmed from a conversation I was having with my friend about the S4 finale and it grew from there. I don't know why but Derpy just felt like the natural choice to speak with Discord.

This was a very sweet story! Everyone felt in character and I could seriously see this happening in the show (in fact I really hope we get to see something like it in season five)! Derpy was an awesome addition as well, I love the way you wrote her. Applause! :pinkiehappy:

5546623 Thank you for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed my story :pinkiesmile:

Your story was so good, I can't stop reading it. I smiled and then I felt tears on my cheek and then smiled again!

5906914 Thank you for your lovely review :pinkiesmile:

Found this little gem while rummaging around the site. Very happy I found it. It was perfect in every way. I felt very natural for all characters involved. Bravo. :heart:

6460411 Thank you very much for your review :pinkiesmile:

I really love Derpy becoming friends with Discord like this!

7693967 Thank you very much for reviewing. I did enjoy writing the interaction between Discord and Derpy, when I wanted somepony to deliver the letter to Discord she seemed like the best mailpony for the job.

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