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Chloe The Great


BAD TOUCH!

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Discord has always admired Fluttershy in a way that would be viewed odd, and with his latest history of coldly betraying her, he had to step up his game. Even if he hadn't deceived her the way he did, Discord still would be forced to admit it some time--otherwise someone else might take her for themselves. He was famous for keeping what he desired to be within his claws and to be claimed rightfully his. One thing is getting in his way, though. Fluttershy simply has not treated him the same since the incident with Tirek. Little does he know, it is not her who has changed.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 51 )

“I’m sorry, Discord,” Fluttershy apologized and gave me a kiss on the cheek.

Him.

Only mistake I noticed.

Good story. I'm interested in seeing where it goes.

Good story but... I don't think it should end in romance. Unless, you have a way to make it seem NOT forced. :heart::pinkiehappy:

4844025 Hah, does it seem forced so far? :twilightblush: I apologize for that! :twilightsmile:


4843385 Thank you for very much :yay:

4844413 No, it's fine now but, for example, if in a story Discord kills all aliconrs, Discord can NOT date Celestia. I simply hope Discord's friendship with Fluttershy is not mested up badly...:fluttercry:

okay. favorite, check. save to book marks, check. waiting, check. you have my full attention! lets do this!!!:pinkiehappy:

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You're quite welcome. :pinkiesmile:

Fluttershy... poor baby :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:
Having her adorable bottom slashed :fluttershysad::fluttershysad::fluttershysad:
Whyyyyyyyyyyy?????? :raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair:

This looks interesting I cant wait to see what happens

You. Update. NOW. This story is AH-MAZING.

4851585 You really like?? :pinkiegasp: Well, I'm not sure what to say! :rainbowkiss: Thank you very much, it's nothing much. This is also my first story that isn't clop, so...:twilightblush:

4844514 Oh...one thing I forgot to ask! Who do you ship with Fluttershy? :rainbowhuh:

4879706 Nobody, really. I'm that person that watches a show for one person, Discord in this case, so I never thought of shipping Fluttershy with anyone but Discord. In fact, I only have strong feelings for two ships. But, for example, I read a story named Discord in Hell ( Not Literally), where a evil Fluttershy is hurting Discord. In that story you CAN'T ship Discord with Fluttershy because it would feel forced ( you have to read the story to fully understand what I mean, it's a one shot.) :3

this was...
DA MAGICKS
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awwwwwwwwwwwww h-how sweet. loved the first two chapters:heart::scootangel:!

The story is interesting so far. I'm wondering will there be any new chapters soon? :twilightsmile:

I... preferred the horses... Now I'm not sure whether Fluttershy is a human with ears, or a pony with fingers. And is Discord still a draconequus? Or just an odd human? Or.... Both? :facehoof:

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Yeah, I know. I think I've figured it out

waitwaitwait, the bird landed on her finger?

5567043 New chapter has been published today :pinkiesmile:

don't lose faith in this story. More chapters please

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By next week! :heart: Thanks for the support, you three!! :yay:

6178906 HURRAH I LIKE UPDATES YES

*ahem* I mean...

Do continue this story, old sport. Never give up in fan of fiction!

You're always going to have days when you feel like you should quit writing, and there will always be someone better then you so you improve, work on it more and more until you get to a level in which you can really enjoy your own writing, but that's my option. You done great, you're improving a good deal and I'm excited to see where this goes.

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News on Update:

Should the new chapter take a serious or light tone? Make both..?

6210454 *tch* from the angle I'm at right now It's starting to go in the direction of some clop. Is that okay? I'd have to change the rating but I'm not sure if it's worth it...

6210397 I like serious or light, depends on the mood of the chapter. As long as it isn't too serious. :twilightsmile:

mmm i think i would go serious based on the tone of the story as of now. Just don't let comments sway you too much it's still your story . Can't wait to see it

6210687 If the clop has an influence on the story, keep it! If not, save a clop scene for the very end.

*squee* A new chapter! *takes a slight peek at the chapter*

NO! I am not worthy to gaze upon this much Fluttercord!

...I must pace myself. Read only a sentence at a time.

*skims through the entire chapter, squees, then reads it normally*

...that's how I read every good Fluttercord fan fiction. Including this one!

Awe. So stinking cute! I :heart: it.

4880012 I was looking back on comments. Now, I really want the link to dat shit. Giv it hither!!

6222116 Alas, I cannot! My phone quite dislikes linking stories. But, the writer of the story is Alarajrogers. I must warn you though, the story is EXTREAMLY nsfw and has mentions of.... Pretty intense things. I shan't post it here for your story is too pure for such a conversation.

Furthermore... Quite frankly, 42 weeks ago, I was actually being... Quite forceful. I shouldn't have tried to tell you if your story should or shouldn't end in romance. I was a social dunce at the time. Do your shipping how you want to!

Yes! Yes! Love this chapter best yet:heart:

6225161 Thank you so much! :heart: :pinkiegasp: It means so much.

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I have some plans for the next chapter! Anybody have any desires as for what they want so I can add it in possibly this one or the one after it?

Comment posted by ChaosQueen deleted Aug 10th, 2015

The magic on Spike’s lips dissolved.
“He totally digs her,” he snickered.
“No shit, sherclop.” Twilight slumped in her seat.

I'm confused. Who do they think Discord has a crush on, Fluttershy or Discord?

6385922 I'm confused at your comment...:twilightsheepish: I use the correct pronouns and am specific with who I am referring to, so why is that you are confused? Especially the first line...that one seems a tad irrelevant.

You my friend are a great writer, I felt like I was there!!:pinkiehappy:

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