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Sylpheed Dashstep


It is writing again

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Svante has known and been with Featherblitz for his entire life, and today is the day that he finally asks her the question that's been on his mind for years now. But one thing keeps him from asking.

What if she says no?


Made as a submission to PressStart's Changeling Romance Contest. Also made as a tribute for my girlfriend who has somehow managed to deal with me for six months and still forgives me for not having any money to buy her a gift. Featherblitz is her creation and Svante is a random Changeling that I created for this story but they both may make an appearance in a later story(?).

And don't worry, I should be done with Changelings soon for those of you getting sick of all the Changelings that I'm writing.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

Short and sweet. I like it.

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Thanks :twilightsmile: I'm glad you think so, I can only hope the person this was meant for thinks the same way (she hasn't read it yet because she has no access to internet where she's currently at)

Lot of punctuation errors, but pretty decent.

A sweet story :)
I would have liked to see it in more detail over a longer period of time.
I get the feeling that this story is a little... personally based. Is that true? If this is prying, feel free to ignore me :twilightsheepish:

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Yeah, it was written for who was my girlfriend at the time, now we’re engaged :twilightsmile:

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Oh, that’s awesome! :twilightsmile:

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