• Published 11th Jun 2014
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My little Venom: a monster inside - Shadowheart332



A week after the events of the canterlot wedding. Twilight is visited by a black slime beast in her sleep. What could happen...

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The concept is interesting but until you polish up the grammar, I'm not reading it

4546565 that's not nice:twilightangry2: I really like this story:heart: and can't wait to see the sequel:pinkiehappy:

5293048 You can like it, it doesn't matter. But if you like it now, it'd be ten times better when polished up by a decent editor

5293286 ok :twilightoops:but still be nice:fluttercry:

You mentioned a sequel. Is there a sequel? If so, would you post the link to the sequel in the story's description please? If not, would you remove the chapter mentioning the sequel from the story, either until you make the sequel (if you plan on making the sequel) or permanently (if you do not plan on making the sequel) please? Thank you very much. However, if you do not plan on making a sequel, then shame on you! Shame on you for dangling a promise of a sequel like that in front of our faces and then taking it away! :flutterrage: :raritydespair: :pinkiesad2:

After going to your page, I have found out why the sequel is not made yet. I have also found out that the story that the sequel has been put on hold for is incomplete and has been since 19th Aug 2014. Is there any plans for completing that story in the future? If not, then expect me to get back on your case for the sequel to this story. Also, if you are looking for an editor for this story, I would be happy to do that for you.

5423535 sure........uh how do i do that? do i post my email or something.

5423535 i have started work on the sequel but I've been too busy working( in real life) to write stories.:fluttercry:

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Oh. Okay. Well, I understand that real life takes up time and doesn't leave a lot of time to write stories. Also, how do you do what? If you are talking about the editing of your story, I was just going to post comments on the chapters that have incorrect spelling and grammar.

5423716 also i'm still trying to figure out the grammar, but if you can help with the spelling it would be very helpful. and i'll try and work more on the sequel if it will make everyone happy.

Comment posted by Shadowheart332 deleted Dec 26th, 2014

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I missed things? Damn. Will do.

4534903 hi, here is an Email I sent to you today Regarding My little Venom 4 and the Replacement story for Transformers: Secret of the Mane Six: http://www.fimfiction.net/manage_user/messages/8389822
with thanks and hopes up,
From your biggest fan of all time ever,
Shane W.L. Nokes aka James S.K. Plasma

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